Aight you know I dont rhyme much and when I do I dont do it seriously. This is some shit I wrote in like 2mins and its Shit. Seriously, not THE shit, just shit. Anyway its only 8 lines so read it and lemme know what you think. Oh and before you tell me, I know it aint complex, in fact its the opposite of complex but rate it anyway BITCH!!!

All the ladies call me, the Pimp Young Cee /
Down south with my mouth, Im a king like Bun B /
Bitch, I eat more pussy than cervical cancer /
Got chicks on my pole mayne, like erotic dancers /
Im trans-continental but bitch Im far from Virgin /
Hit chicks from the back more than endescope surgeons /
But this one ho I fucked that bitch was from Russia /
Now I need ointment cuz Im Burnin more than Usher /


Now hit me up with F.E.E.D.B.A.C.K.
- Dunno what the dots are for, juss thought it looked cool

Its cool for a 2min speel.. check mine out...
what do you think?

This is some Classic shit right here and Im talking Classic in the Classicest sense of the motherfuckin word. Stand up and recognize motherfuckers!!!

@ this thread
@ ur rhyme

ur not pimp c homie....sorry...

ur rhyme was wack--no more no less.....more average then a nursery rhyme
i'll give u that....

let me read something else....u know ...better..

lol.......come on ya'll it wasn't that bad (no joke)......I gotta give you props for poppin in. And while most of the lines are played concepts, it was nice, especially for a dude who don't really rap.

Lol, It was takin the piss. I dont even rap AT ALL I just write stupid shit every now and then. See : "Scooby Doo". Old-School members will know what I mean.

Thought it was some funny shit........ sevyn over half this board is some mediocre, nursery rhyme, simplistic shit. From abbreviating every word in the dictionary(cuz mthafkers lzy) to reading some of the dumbest analogies and metaphors "EVER!"