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You're lucky im your property.....thats whats stoppin me
from bitchin as you sloppily, chicken scratch on top of me
you probably think i enjoy it......takin the point
of the pen wit ya finger joints...Damn that shit gets annoyin
but you make me flamboyant for the most case
without you theres no trace of emotion...Im just a poker face
sometimes i dont relate to what you wrote and phrased...
but over days i start to understand the quotes on the page
Im ya roll cage for when you in a collision....
not good at givin advice but always willin to listen
you vision black ink as my caucasion pages flip
but for me its another interacial relationship
my patience wit your determination and rhyme facts
is amazin.... but fades as you close in on my back
How should i act?....even though you been true to me
I truthfully think that when Im full you'll have no use for me.........



mutiple toasters


i look up to you and envy you, i'm a canvas for your penmanship/
your relentlessness, seems like you're destined to put your head into these sentences/
i'm like a means to your end, you're like a fiend for the pen/
and when your on my last page i see my dream's about to end/
your precise-ness when you write-shit is refreshing like a light-mist/
i analyze your sliced-right-wrist but your lines have a christ's-wit/
as time-ticks, your rhymes-shift, you grip my hips with a tight-fist/
i remember when we werent so aquainted,like my life didnt exist/
your inner mind is like a sinner combined with intertwined crimes/
you skip dinner time to finish scribes like einstenin in his prime/
i'm filled with syntax from your synapse, flows comprised of prose/
and lines composed of dialect you chose mixed with intelligence inter-wove/
i'm just another slut to you, look what this game has done to you/
and when i'm filled with notions and feelings, then you'll run to who?/
a replacement that looks like me, same qualities that i possess?/
and poison it with ink like you did to me, to release stress from your left breast/
i'm tryin to say, you brighten days, when you open up my lines and spray/
in a spiteful way, you'll close me up and carlessly throw my life away

HOT SHIT FELLAS..SOLID DROP 8/10..NO ONE WANT TO COLLAB WIT ME.... ..LOL

check ya messages dap..bump this shit

i got ya message juss now punk ass..tryin to come at a nigga on the answerin machine..lol..u gon make me have to freestyle now..lol..rate my thread a dream homie

this was good also, a topic I would've never thought of to rap about but ya'll flipped it well, and kept multi's through most of ya verses, good drops.
9/10

you gonna get mad i used a part of ya name now..relax...yo, ave, good shit fam, people sleepin on this shit

Was good, Lacked a bit of vocab

7/10

Whoa? Now my opinion is'nt good enough?

I have my opinion ok and i'm sticking with it, the reason you got a 7 is because theres people out there who do this alot better than you and only get 8's and 9's usually so i'd be happy with a 7

For instance

Blak Ty aka Non Phixxxion .. My man does verses all the time at the highest quality and does'nt always get 10's and beleive me his stuff is far superior to you and me

Did i say anything about how long it took you? if you wanted better feedback then take longer...Don't rush something then complain when your feedbacks weak

You know what thats exactly the response i expected from you though

Go elevate

-Knuxx

hey all just chill

let whts been said go no point arguein ova it

i'm filled with syntax from your synapse, flows comprised of prose/
and lines composed of dialect you chose mixed with intelligence inter-wove/

I DID see that kid but still it needs to be consistant and i ever said your vocab was WEAK i just said there was areas where it lacked

Ok i accept your battle
-How many mins?
-What beat?
-Deadline?

?

dog, in a thread, 1o lines, no beat homes, text...i'll set a thread and drop your shit

LMAO

Yo MR this kids talkin to me like i never texted battled before

Man i texted for like 2 years and lost 3 outta between 100 and 150 battles

Now 1st off if you call some1 out you drop first

But seen as i gave up text battling like 2 or 3 months ago i don't think i'll accept

i'm saying you was like "drop how, what beat"? playing all stupid and shit...and dont whine to m.r., he cant save you...and i dont give a fuck about you old washed up battles....just accept the shit now, you think i'mma drop and have you not show, fuck i look like...

With a gun in ya avatar you look like a wannabe thug

Now i tell you what drop on audio or not at all

How can you be a rapper if you don't rap?

Yo yall muhfuckas arguein and fuckin the whole thread up.......cats sleepn on this shit and it prolly need a new thread now.....Damn fellas.....get real

Yo Ava

If you read this thread you'll see all i did was give my opinion

It's ya boy who can't accept he aint the best pissed of because i did'nt give yall a 10

Glad to see you took it better though

ok its your opinion....appreciate the feed and everyone that resonded but yall aint have to spam this shit up.....oh well fuck it

^^^true story^^^...you fuckin dickhead....

fuck it, bump, i respect your shit knuxx, and i do rap, just no audio on xxl fam...bump for feed...one

bump once mo......dont sleep on it...Lefty nice drop yo....this shit is dumb hard imo

bumparump