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lefty two guns
YEZZIR, COME WITH IT BURBS..
Suburbs85
im try'n to explain what happend
a reason to comit treason on my girl i cant fathom//
i had got caught now im labeled a cheat
i hate be'n discreet but im not complete without a little deciet//
she knew this when we started go'n out
i had a girl then to but it was her i was all about//
she didnt want to hear an explaination
she used to be my salvation from temptation
and the other girl was just for vaction//
but now im back and ready to be with you
she's was really just a thing i treated with misuse//
i knew she was going to end it right then and there
i had to end it first or end up like bush and tony blair
a lauphing stock to my friends and all the while unaware//
she stared to talk and then she paused for a second
" i was actually just calling to say i was pregnet"//

aight......



naztynaz
nice Suburbs. I like the lines "she used to be my salvation from temptation
and the other girl was just for vacAtion"

lefty two guns
me and the wife beefin, thinking of deceiving on the weekend/
possibly creepin, all while hoping the relationship aint ceasing/
this chick at work been talking slick, and shooting seductive glances/
knows my situation, but still wants me to take my chances/
the x-rated emails about the things she'd probably do to me/
emotions pouring fluidly, this type of affair isnt new to me/
so she takes the cell and i take hers not thinking of what might occur/
and we went our for drinks, maybe too many, the whole night was a blur/
ended up back at her crib, i swore my wife had no idea/
clothes were peeling off, heavy breathing, dazed from the sangria/
she had some garter's on, i had 99 problems but not sean carter's song/
i hope nobody seen us, we wasnt at the bar for long/
just as she started to wrap her lucious lips around my shit/
i thought i heard a sound and shit, the bedroom lock un-clicked/
my wife kicked in the door, she let off two shots for my behavior/
oh my bad, forgot to tell yall this bitch was our next door neighbor ohmy.gif

burbs verse


im try'n to explain what happend
a reason to comit treason on my girl i cant fathom//
i had got caught now im labeled a cheat
i hate be'n discreet but im not complete without a little deciet//
she knew this when we started go'n out
i had a girl then to but it was her i was all about//
she didnt want to hear an explaination
she used to be my salvation from temptation
and the other girl was just for vaction//
but now im back and ready to be with you
she's was really just a thing i treated with misuse//
i knew she was going to end it right then and there
i had to end it first or end up like bush and tony blair
a lauphing stock to my friends and all the while unaware//
she stared to talk and then she paused for a second
" i was actually just calling to say i was pregnet"//
Suburbs85
that was good shit lefty
laugh.gif laugh.gif *Next door* laugh.gif laugh.gif
naztynaz
laugh.gif laugh.gif that was really funny lefty, on the real though, the flow was really smooth. The chick was the next door neighbour AND worked at the same place? Dangerous stuff lol
lefty two guns
good shit burbs, thanks naz...bump for more feed
naztynaz
Is this a battle then? unsure.gif
lefty two guns
ah nah...i wanted to collab with mad heads, burbs was the first cat to bring up a topic, so we went with it...no battle just for feedback and shit...still looking for other topics rom other emcees though..get at me
naztynaz
lefty, i sent you a PM
MC Cutless
ayo on the real thats nice shit can i add a lil sumthing sumthing.

she moved in and i knew my shit was lost,
that night we crawled into bed, her feet cold like winter frost.
if i looked at another woman, out came the claws,
but she got mad if she was talkin to another guy, and i broke his jaw.
for months shit was moving at a good pace,
every night, she gave me head, and i gave her face.
she slept on the left, i took the right,
cause i didnt care why i slept, cause her shit was tight.
but that all changed, after our 3 month anniversary,
i came home early to surpise her, and the night ended,
with me dispising her.
cause i got her in bed with my best friend fred, and my other friend jack,
yep full mouthed,legs split, layin on her back.
I got pissed, I punched all of em in the mouth,
then told those backstabbin fuckers, to grab the "trash", and get out my house.
naztynaz
lefty PM

and Cutless, i'd love to read one from you and comment.
naztynaz
QUOTE (MC Cutless @ Feb 8 2005, 12:19 PM)
ayo on the real thats nice shit can i add a lil sumthing sumthing.

she moved in and i knew my shit was lost,
that night we crawled into bed, her feet cold like winter frost.
if i looked at another woman, out came the claws,
but she got mad if she was talkin to another guy, and i broke his jaw.
for months shit was moving at a good pace,
every night, she gave me head, and i gave her face.
she slept on the left, i took the right,
cause i didnt care why i slept, cause her shit was tight.
but that all changed, after our 3 month anniversary,
i came home early to surpise her, and the night ended,
with me dispising her.
cause i got her in bed with my best friend fred, and my other friend jack,
yep full mouthed,legs split, layin on her back.
I got pissed, I punched all of em in the mouth,
then told those backstabbin fuckers, to grab the "trash", and get out my house.

good shit Cutless, i like the line "if i looked at another woman, out came the claws,
but she got mad if she was talkin to another guy, and i broke his jaw", that misunderstanding/jealousy is a BIG problem in relationships.


But i didn't see the rhyme in

"but that all changed, after our 3 month anniversary,
i came home early to surpise her, and the night ended,
with me dispising her."

maybe I read it in a different way or something but when I read it it seemed a bit out of place, could just be me.

god what right do I have in commenting on rhymes? unsure.gif
MC Cutless
ayo thanx nasty. appreciate it.
naztynaz
QUOTE (MC Cutless @ Feb 8 2005, 12:53 PM)
ayo thanx nasty. appreciate it.

you don't have to listen to my analysis's cos its not like I rhyme and can use technical language on it, i just go with my instinct lol
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