juss bear wit me on this i know it seems kinda long ya'll but i thought wat would i wanna say to my moms (who i dont speak to)



Dear mama, all i got for u is amore
ur the woman in my life that i truly adore
i know times is rough cuz me and u got problems
but i juss couldnt let my pride solve em'
all that time i thought u were on his* side
but me and I** had the gun in hand ready to ride
I know losin Kadeem*** really hurt u
but then losin me was like pain times two
ma u gotta understand a rapper is rough to be
epsecialy when i got people around doubtin me
ma i love u, but this pain had me vexed
sometimes i smoke cess to get the stress off my chest
but i know, u want wats best for me
cuz, "no weapon formed against" is even messin wit me****
sometimes i lay at night and think about wat we coulda had
get mad and blame it on u and dad
u wasnt a crack feind juss a black queen
dont worry one day ya son gon stack cream
trust me ma, its not a dream, all i need is the right label and my management team
i know as a child i was ya bundle of joy but one day u gonna be proud of ya boy
stand up in the front of a church and say "he did it!"
instead of me being in a court tryin to get accquited
ma when i get signed i want u to be there
so i wont be alone like im playin solitare
cuz i need u beside me, to pray and advise me
cuz one day im gon famous like Ron Isley
and thanks to a friend, who opened my eyes
for tryin to re'knot out broken "family ties"
cuz i wanna give my moms flowers, while she alive
not on top of the casket dressed in all black when she dies



*-a long time ago me and my moms stop speakin cuz she was takin up for the pastor i accused of tryin to fuck wit me(on some real shit im mad sensative about that..im mad cool wit yall on here..juss openin up a little..dont ever use that in a battle against me...for real..appreciate it)

**..Iyonda my nephew...we was gonna kill that nigga but i thought twice about killin a "man of god"

***.. my brother Kadeem who passed away when i was younger

****- a scriputre found in the bile somewhere i cant remember right now.."no weapon formed against me shall prosper"


i damn near cried typin this whole thing..juss pourin out a piece of my soul to ya'll..im juss that kind of rapper..but appreciate the time evry takes to read this..juss put ya self in my shoes and really think if u aint had ya moms around in ya life

ratings?

good lookin merit...i know thats a fuked up thing homie to deal wit...u feel like a peice of ya life is missin sumthin

......wow too much raw emotion here

sick drop

10/10

10/10 on some real shit. The emotion makes it ill.

yo for real thanks yall for feelin this..juss wanted to put somethin real emotional here..i never really do topicals, juss wanted to do somethin real..aprreciate all the feedback fo real..

Damn Dap thats some shit man 15/10 for openin up to the board on some real shit homie and if anybody does ever use that shit in battle against you homie I got your back in comin down on em

This is a definite 10 Dapa. I had to clear the tear outta my eye dawg! I feel you. Although I got my moms in my life..I have had several missing links..so I understand but still I know it's now the same dawg. This is a special piece right here and everybody should recognize what this is. THIS is lyricism to me! Puttin what you put into this...nothin can compare cuzin. Respect

thanks E...cherish ya moms homie fo real..i dont get to see mine or really speak to her at all

dap...................I'm speechless, mad props homie

wow that was amazing...on a scale from 1-10..11
reminds me of the time in 9th grade i wrote my parents a poem about how much i loved them just so they wouldnt be pissed when they saw what was after it (my report card)...

bump for ratings

Shits Hot. Enuff Said. 9/10

good lookin murderous

Daaaammmmnnn i been so busy i missed this......
yo dap, real talk a masterpiece! most these cat are jus name on a screen
you got showed life and emotion....1 - up

yo appreicate the luv murderous morph

ratings?

DAPA.... NOW U KNOW I DONT VENTURE TO THIS SIDE OF THE FORUM, BUT I MUST SAY... EXCELLENT... NOW KEEPIN IN MIND THAT I DO KNOW THE DEAL WIT YOUR SITUATION, I THINK IT MIGHTA BEEN HEALIN TO U IN A SENSE... P AND LEVENE WOULD BE PROUD I KNOW U BEEN THRU A LOT, JUSS REMEMBER, IT FEELS SO MUCH BETTER TO GET IT OUT, AND IF U PUTTIN IT IN A RHYME, DO IT... MUCH PROPS (I BETTA GET ASKED TO DO THE HOOK ON DIS ONE TOO)

aww I could feel that cause it was real and it's hard to share shit like that...i don't know my real parents so i know how it is

good drop 8.5/10

good looks shizz..any more ratings people?

how many niggas can come in here and display them typa fellingz ?????

mmm hmmm.......i couldnt think of nobody either
my manz dropped a deep one on yall assez
i like how this one feel..... .......im sick of niggaz talkin bout how hard and how raw they shyt is.........finnally an mc with some evident vesitality

good shyt gAWd...........10+ dammit.....

fukk all yall one-2 topic niggas..........

thanks for the luv killa kane..yo im bout be out for the nite..but keep the ratings comin people..appreciate all the ratings and comments

word, dapa...hot shit!!!

alot of people on here try to get real technical with their rhymes which is cool sometimes, nothing wrong with that...but i always felt a rhyme that's filled with honest pure emotion is MORE powerful than anything else...

and thru these words we could tell you sincerely poured your heart out in this...

it reminds me of the prayer rhyme i recently did...it was the truth...or how mic-slap's rhyme that he did withh maria...your shit is so powerful...nuff respect...

there's NO rating HIGH ENOUGH to top this piece...

nigga your mom is a bitch, she fucked some men
got knocked up, dont know who to tell shes pregnant
so she had the kid, lips red with lipstick
had no talent, but figured he would get rich rapping
wanna be mack, who gets pussy for stacks
rapped at arenas, crowd asked for money back
this dudes a bitch, how lame can u get
dont talk to your mom, wished shed had an abortion

nigga your moms a bitch, if i had an ugly ass nigga like you, i wouldnt speak to you either
that rhyme was weak nigga
you got no skills
suck my dick and make yourself useful

WHUT A HERB

thanks evryone...keep the ratings comin..i swear niga keep my moms name oput ya mouth..end of story

........some people are just ignorant or either have no skills so they have to resort to the typical lame ass rhymes...SMH

Damn roc nichelle??

Can yall peep my drop..dap gets all the love man

10

Nice drop nigga for real. I can't put a rating on true emotions nigga. Nice drop!!

GOOD LOOKIN 326..ANY MORE RATINGS?

9.99999999999/10 hell 10/10 nice drop dapa

GOOD LOOKIN TOP

I really felt this piece, very similar to the iLL drop mic slap wrote about his parents in the summer. You laid your emotions out on this piece and thats the main reason this piee flourished. Hopefully this piece is replicated on wax. Much props.

10/10

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u wasnt a crack feind juss a black queen

this line was a little reminiscent of Pac's line in "dear mama"...

overall i was feeling the story and the way you opened up...

But the flow messed it up...it wasn't tight at all...and if over a beat, it prolly wouldn't match...you gotta work on that...u should also use multis with everyline...cause u sound like an amatuer just using it every now and then..

overall: 9.3

good lookin chris..ill try to put some more multis in my drops..im gonna do it to a beat either tonite or tommorow so i'll see how it comes out

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I just read this whole thread...and I gave you like the worst rating....