Hi Haters! i'm back from a season long of hiatus
on any track i'm considered an annihilator..w/this wild flava
my mouth is dangerous..& behavior get towns angered
causin major disturbia, like a bunch of loud neighbors
i'm da sickest since Eric Wright's last second on earth
my pockets proof, i stack cake high..like wedding dessert
ya couldn't make it rain even doin an indian dance
i'm ahead of time, two steppin into da next millenium man!
i don't do da stanky leg, shit..i'm too clean for that
my format is not for wack..westcoast! is where i loiter at
i'm da boss and ya'll laid-off, for a permanent recession
annd! i'm like a zillion dollar stimulas a package.....what a blessin
honey's nibble on my lobes like lobbist givin earmarks
let's jack GM's jet so i can beat it like MJ near stars
don't confuse da term beatin w/chris hittin rihanna
i treat women w/honor..unless i black out like emo's sinnin mammaz

done deal...............

This was kind of disappointing. There was a couple of decent lines, but overall,
the only positive about this verse is the flow structure. I think you can do better
than this.

I e.n.j.o.y. your honest feedback..really