yah..

its called

I NEED A BETTER MIC VOL. 1



www.myspace.com/taytheegreat


and dont say i sound like wayne..please
i got a young voice im..still young ass hell

you don't sound like wayne..but the flow pattern does to be honest..ya rhymes ain't bad but it does need a little maturing..as you said you young so we'll leave it at that..

overall good luck w/ya aspirations and that's comin from a nigga that neva could stand lil wayne..fuck that nigga!!!!!!!!!

good looking i got another track

well 2 of em

lala

and

paradise

o and that shit mean alot

because i member we used to go at it...and well yah i was weak...

but im happy u showing some good feedback without the ass kissing

good lookS

neva ass kissin nobody mayne..i tell it like it is only..if i feel you came wack or sick dissin me or not i'll admit it..like the old topical battle w/rascar i felt i won but i understood why he beat me cuz his shit was tight as fuck..he earned that win with the shit he came..that was da best fuckin battle i had live or text..

for the record i never had real beef with you or anyone on the net..this is da fun shit to me..i might not agree with everything you or anyone do but it ain't close to beef..ain't no damn way i'm gon hit you in da face over some internet shit like a bully ass net geek if i met you..i'll give you a pound and a shot of grand marnier & hennessey then step off..

besides you one of those next westcoast niggas to make sure we stay on da map..i see in you what i see in my little brother bout to finish his new video for "make my dough" PASSION & HUNGER!!

you on da right track..just get ya lawyer, copywriting, pubishing rights, etc and you in there..fuck lil wayne's library and you in there..come with YO SHIT and nobody else but YOU

what up nigga. sorry i been working. but that shit is cool lil homie.

beach talk- dope ass lyrics kid. you went it in on that. i like the flow.

im bad- "the way i use these words they consider me an arsen"

paradise- i clean out the dirt from my hands with singles. that was crafty

lala- the whole flow was nice, no corny lines, and real shit.

the last shit was hard to.

i liked your shit boy. new respect. you aint on no shit thats above you. your lines are real and there is no fall offs. usually when i hear random shit theres always a couple of lazy bars where a nigga is just wasting time. but you kept it consistent. Your a dope rapper man, theres no questioning that. you got skills and probably are better than 98 percent of niggas on here. for a nigga thats never recorded, its just as much as the swag and energy you say your lines with then it actually is what your saying. you got that swag part down. but is that shit just a hobby to you or what. like basketball to me. basketball is my hobby. im good as shit at it. but never wanted to take it to a professional level so i just fuck around and aint really as good as i would be had i put everything into it. if this shits just a hobby, nigga you there. keep flowing, keep posting. but if you really trying to rap, you need to find that shit. your lyrics are dope as shit but you sound like alot of other niggas. there are a lot of citees out there nigga. alot of niggas can rap. what you bring different than them niggas. you need to work on your hook game and focus some on writing songs whos lyrics are based around a title and central theme. its not easy. it takes practice but you already off to a good start. and you gotta change your pro tools and mic. that mic is a good starter mic but if you ever trying to make shit you wanna burn and give to niggas and play, that aint gonna cut it. you can get a solid sony mic from Frys for like 100$. if you got a mac i would truly suggest investing like 200 into that itunes pro tools, if not go with the windows version. if you truly think you got some shit ready get with a real producer and lay your shit down. lemme know what you use my nigga i got a few bootleg hookups and some nice recording programs. add as many friends on your myspace as you can nigga. 100 aint even close to enough. pimp your shit nigga. thats your shit. thats your life and your words. if that bitch aint a fuckin journal or diary that pimp that motha fucker on these niggas. add every fuckin body. good luck nigga, keep pumping out that crack

hell yah imma take this shit serious..
im using some broke down program...i really need some shit...i wanna get signed dawg badddddd



i do need a mic too..ill pay for that but u got the hook up on the programs ?


and thats just my music page..on my main page i got 1775 friends...so i just post bulletins and direct em to it


but yah good lookin on the feed back


i got another track to i jus made.. imma post that topic too

i only got a second nigga but ima listen to your new shit later.

just so you keep the shit in mind

a nigga dont need to be signed to make money from this shit.

invest and press your shit up. let me know if you tryin to come down to hollyhood and chop shit up lil nigga

i mos def issssssss


u got an aim or something no homo...
but we both westcoasters and i stay n the beach..30 minutes from the woods




its nothing .. i need a contact though...

818 497 3644

if i dont answer leave a message or text a nigga. i stay busy so sometimes it takes a day or two to check voicemails and get back to a nigga. ima be in vegas till wednesday but hit me up. i got a sick 4 of july jumpoff going down at area at hollyhood.