The come up.
(verse 1)
Mind over matter I splitter splatter your brain matter/
Leave your dreams shattered you over actor rappers just seem wacker/
I’ve never been an enemy with the rhyme my punch lines/
Cripple minds and makes your shit a canine/
My words are that of a genus a remarkable theses/
Leaving your mind to ponder how in the world can you compete with/
The lyrical, spiritual, visual rhyme spitter/
Like lyrical mind liquar my words intoxicate you niggas/
High off the herbs, you can…die from my words/
I’ve been fly as a bird…since a…nigga’s first terd/
Was that to visual, I’m sorry for the over mobiticity/
I’m just so lyrical you see that I condense these melodies/
So please remember me, jot it in you not book binder/
This is just a reminder that my shine will fucking blind ya/
(hook) X’s 3
one to the two, two to the three/
yall ain’t fucking with mr. Veto ali/
I won’t stop…nigga I’m hot/
Came from the bottom now I’m raising to the top/
Full Version: "the Come Up" (tell Me What Yall Think) (verse 1)
damn can a nigga get some feedback??? i give feed on yall shit. lol
that sound like it can be rapped fast as hell
but still good mayne
but still good mayne
it was pretty good Veto, just need to perfect your grammar
example:
"rising to the top" not "raising to the top"
example:
"rising to the top" not "raising to the top"
| QUOTE (shaunie @ Nov 2 2005, 01:04 PM) |
| it was pretty good Veto, just need to perfect your grammar example: "rising to the top" not "raising to the top" |
lol thats my spelling....it's a trad mark.
@Setsotama yeah i can speed it up more...its' like at a medium speed.
j/c mayne
cuz the way it was written, thats why I asked
cuz the way it was written, thats why I asked
are u going to have audio, so we can listen to it?
@shaunie
yeah but not soon...i've got 4 other songs i have to go and lay down....but if i have enough money i'll do this one in the same session i have comming up also....but if not i'll just bring it out the box later. it has a dope beat also.
@ it's all good....i'm bad at spelling when i rush my typing and shit. lol...it's all good.
yeah but not soon...i've got 4 other songs i have to go and lay down....but if i have enough money i'll do this one in the same session i have comming up also....but if not i'll just bring it out the box later. it has a dope beat also.
@ it's all good....i'm bad at spelling when i rush my typing and shit. lol...it's all good.
i thought that shit was nice veto
i wasnt really feelin the chorus though to be real..
shit was hot though..stay on it
i wasnt really feelin the chorus though to be real..
shit was hot though..stay on it
i kind of like the hook...it's for the clubs back home...i'm also getting my "cocky rapper" on. lol.....but thanks homie...i might change it up to something hotter though......never know.
its all good fam..an audio of it would be kool.
| QUOTE (eye_cue @ Nov 2 2005, 01:45 PM) |
| its all good fam..an audio of it would be kool. |
yeah i'll get off my ass and get on that shit....thanks homie.
hmmm..........iono what u're doin here Veto....u start off u tryna get lyrical...but say that this drop is meant for tha clubs....try toning it down ah little
Mind over matter I splitter splatter your brain matter/
Leave your dreams shattered you over actor rappers just seem wacker/
wit lines like^^^...u'll never reach tha limelight.....splitter splatter?...cummon dog u can do better than that....
Crux 4 Pres
Mind over matter I splitter splatter your brain matter/
Leave your dreams shattered you over actor rappers just seem wacker/
wit lines like^^^...u'll never reach tha limelight.....splitter splatter?...cummon dog u can do better than that....
Crux 4 Pres
| QUOTE (crucifixio @ Nov 2 2005, 01:47 PM) |
| hmmm..........iono what u're doin here Veto....u start off u tryna get lyrical...but say that this drop is meant for tha clubs....try toning it down ah little Mind over matter I splitter splatter your brain matter/ Leave your dreams shattered you over actor rappers just seem wacker/ wit lines like^^^...u'll never reach tha limelight.....splitter splatter?...cummon dog u can do better than that.... Crux 4 Pres |
yeah i was talking about the hook being for the clubs cause the beat is really a club jump off.....i feel you though ....damn you didn't like that line though? lol....i'll keep at it...thanks for the feed homie.
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