Full Version: Any One Wanna Battle
lookin for a good battle.... just startin
When?? Haven't battled yet but would like to.
since ur new drop first, so i can tell wether ur worth my all or not.
maximum of 16 lines, with no minimum line limit,
no flipping,
3 votes to win.
maximum of 16 lines, with no minimum line limit,
no flipping,
3 votes to win.
I should be outside, battlin', usin my head
But instead i'm here battlin' Brev on the web
When I rap, i'm channelin' 'Pac or Biggie Smalls
And all y'all just prayin' tha white dude falls
But it ain't gon' happen, whatz my last call?
With any ov my barz, i ensure your downfall
Now u say i might not be worth battlin', whatz wrong with u?
Afraid to battle, cuz my rhymez iz sick like the flu
Now fuck it i don't need to emulate Jigga or Eminem
all i need to squash my beefz iz a quiet room and a pen
Maybe someday we'll meet up then
and y'all realize u fucked with the wrong poisonous pen
now when listen to Big L, just get real weeded
understand why i'm madd heated
heist my lines, cause u need it
youse a pussy & all i do iz beat it
But instead i'm here battlin' Brev on the web
When I rap, i'm channelin' 'Pac or Biggie Smalls
And all y'all just prayin' tha white dude falls
But it ain't gon' happen, whatz my last call?
With any ov my barz, i ensure your downfall
Now u say i might not be worth battlin', whatz wrong with u?
Afraid to battle, cuz my rhymez iz sick like the flu
Now fuck it i don't need to emulate Jigga or Eminem
all i need to squash my beefz iz a quiet room and a pen
Maybe someday we'll meet up then
and y'all realize u fucked with the wrong poisonous pen
now when listen to Big L, just get real weeded
understand why i'm madd heated
heist my lines, cause u need it
youse a pussy & all i do iz beat it
wanna watch a "gangsta die?", have yo pen misbehave.
you born into this rap shit? time to show u the grave
i flow the flood, like it's lyrical judgment day
i bust this hurricane, spittin like katrina waves*
WATCHOUT! mutha fucka cuz here i come
i need a challange for the fullest, so nibble my crums
"treat my lines like my dick wen its time to fuck"
i'll let these rymes "go deep" wen im "rappin it up".** <-- ILL
run and hide! cuz im causin -catastropheys-
wen i bust shit, im causin you -cats: disease-
you need work but dont bother bout -askin me-
bite right out my notebook... u still couldnt -rapp like me-
VERSE
* - this is obvious but just in case:
*"i flow (flow liek water flows, and like i "flow my rymes") the flood, like it's lyrical judgment day (judgment day liek end of all things/ destruction)
i bust (rapp) this hurricane, spittin (rappin) like katrina waves (katrina was the hurrican that took out new orleans)
** "treat my lines like my dick wen its time to fuck"
(these lines both corralate)
i'll let these rymes "go deep" (deep inside pussy, and deep lyrics) wen im "rappin it up". (wrappin it up with a condom, and of course rapping it up, like freestyling.)
you born into this rap shit? time to show u the grave
i flow the flood, like it's lyrical judgment day
i bust this hurricane, spittin like katrina waves*
WATCHOUT! mutha fucka cuz here i come
i need a challange for the fullest, so nibble my crums
"treat my lines like my dick wen its time to fuck"
i'll let these rymes "go deep" wen im "rappin it up".** <-- ILL
run and hide! cuz im causin -catastropheys-
wen i bust shit, im causin you -cats: disease-
you need work but dont bother bout -askin me-
bite right out my notebook... u still couldnt -rapp like me-
VERSE
* - this is obvious but just in case:
*"i flow (flow liek water flows, and like i "flow my rymes") the flood, like it's lyrical judgment day (judgment day liek end of all things/ destruction)
i bust (rapp) this hurricane, spittin (rappin) like katrina waves (katrina was the hurrican that took out new orleans)
** "treat my lines like my dick wen its time to fuck"
(these lines both corralate)
i'll let these rymes "go deep" (deep inside pussy, and deep lyrics) wen im "rappin it up". (wrappin it up with a condom, and of course rapping it up, like freestyling.)
flow:g
rhyme:b
punches:b
multi:b
vote: b
rhyme:b
punches:b
multi:b
vote: b
brevan: 1
gangstas: 0
gangstas: 0
Brevs got my vote on this one GDD doesnt make sense in alot of his :S
Hi 
brev 2
ggd: 0
ggd: 0
Overall Brev. GangstazDontDie32, you need to improve you punches son.
| QUOTE |
| Afraid to battle, cuz my rhymez iz sick like the flu |
That concept is played.
| QUOTE |
| youse a pussy & all i do iz beat it |
As is that one. If you found a ill way to reword them that hasn't been done before, then they would've probably hit harder.
brev: 3
gangstasdontdie32: 0
shut out
my new battle record:
1-0 :-P
gangstasdontdie32: 0
shut out
my new battle record:
1-0 :-P
OK, i'll take the L like a man. 2 all that voted, thanks 4 tha feedback. Next time, i'll come harder!!!
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