200 posts to vote UNLESS YOUR IN THE League, explain your muthafuckin vote, none of this "vote- SD cuz i liked his verse better", explain ur fucking vote.
due Monday OCTOBER 31ST YES NO EXTENSIONS, NO EXCEPTIONS, (vets know i keep movin, i dont wait for procrastinators) Muthafuckas take too long when i give them a week to write verses
No multi user votes, I WILL get tha true meaning to check IP's so no ones getting away with that cornball shit
Bite=Banning. As simple as that(Ask Water, dude is banned for good now)
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no biting-automatic DQ
Sign in both of you, if neither drops a verse, the person who signs in will move on.
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Full Version: Byrd Vs Esco
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I'm posting because Hurrican Wilma fuck my place up i don't want to be no show...
Play Esco like a banjo, out flow the momento
Hit him broadside like a torpedo
Get your top blown like a volcano
Erupting vertigo is the only way you’re moving up
I throw unknown flows of pistachio nuts
Got Esco dreaming of rainbows and men not sluts
I’m spit fire threw the wire to retire esco’s empire
You’re coming premature; I’m bulling you like the matador
Take control of this battledore I’m the commodore
Your raps are thin like a little whore from Singapore
You couldn’t land a punch if you threw a bunch
You’re hitting nothing but air
I’m the mystical Byrd its danger beware
Don’t kill the messenger of this massacre
I’ll plaster Esco’s style on a wall like fresco*
He couldn’t spit it fresh if he served it alfresco**
*a method of mural decoration on walls, still damp, to plaster
**in the air “as an alfresco mealâ€
Play Esco like a banjo, out flow the momento
Hit him broadside like a torpedo
Get your top blown like a volcano
Erupting vertigo is the only way you’re moving up
I throw unknown flows of pistachio nuts
Got Esco dreaming of rainbows and men not sluts
I’m spit fire threw the wire to retire esco’s empire
You’re coming premature; I’m bulling you like the matador
Take control of this battledore I’m the commodore
Your raps are thin like a little whore from Singapore
You couldn’t land a punch if you threw a bunch
You’re hitting nothing but air
I’m the mystical Byrd its danger beware
Don’t kill the messenger of this massacre
I’ll plaster Esco’s style on a wall like fresco*
He couldn’t spit it fresh if he served it alfresco**
*a method of mural decoration on walls, still damp, to plaster
**in the air “as an alfresco mealâ€
In
This shit’s easy, seen the title, had to Laugh/
Byrd vs. Esco….what the fuck is that?/
Coulda atleast got a dude who could rap/
Never seen a flow so damn wack/
He throws rhymes together/
But they don’t rhyme Together/
this dude make it? Nah never/
he thinks he’s slick but his rhymes aint clever/
I’d murk you, at point blank range/
Id shoot you but im different, thoughts more insane/
Take note from King David put battery acid in veins/*
Sorta like how you different BYRD, you lame/
(sarcasm)that’s real cool you changed the I to a y in your name/
I aint even gonna be happy when I beat you/
Cause you the worst or the worst,none beneath you/
I cant brag it aint even an accomplishment to defeat you/
*reference to "Never Die Alone"
Byrd vs. Esco….what the fuck is that?/
Coulda atleast got a dude who could rap/
Never seen a flow so damn wack/
He throws rhymes together/
But they don’t rhyme Together/
this dude make it? Nah never/
he thinks he’s slick but his rhymes aint clever/
I’d murk you, at point blank range/
Id shoot you but im different, thoughts more insane/
Take note from King David put battery acid in veins/*
Sorta like how you different BYRD, you lame/
(sarcasm)that’s real cool you changed the I to a y in your name/
I aint even gonna be happy when I beat you/
Cause you the worst or the worst,none beneath you/
I cant brag it aint even an accomplishment to defeat you/
*reference to "Never Die Alone"
vot byrd
i felt that esco was throwin soft lines in there, atleats byrd had a nice flow going
i felt that esco was throwin soft lines in there, atleats byrd had a nice flow going
| QUOTE (streets disciple @ Oct 30 2005, 10:32 PM) |
| vot byrd i felt that esco was throwin soft lines in there, atleats byrd had a nice flow going |
*sighs*elevation is needed here you guys do open mics and freestyle u need to get better at dissing the opposition
anyway like streets said vote byrd for the same reasons
punches:byrd
flow: esco
multiz:? come on ya'll give one or two
personals: esco
rhyme: esco
vocab:? both could had a lil added
the line that fucked up byrd i think is:I throw unknown flows of pistachio nuts
didn't get that at all.
both of ya'll tight but i don't think ya'll really tried on this much. Vote: esco
flow: esco
multiz:? come on ya'll give one or two
personals: esco
rhyme: esco
vocab:? both could had a lil added
the line that fucked up byrd i think is:I throw unknown flows of pistachio nuts
didn't get that at all.
both of ya'll tight but i don't think ya'll really tried on this much. Vote: esco
yeah im not really used to this,like im used to dissin people's clothes and shit its hard to diss motherfuckers you know nothin about besides names and shit.
Both were OK but on this one my decision falls on flow...
Byrd just has to flow a little better...
vote: Esco
Byrd just has to flow a little better...
vote: Esco
| QUOTE (Esco @ Oct 30 2005, 11:47 PM) |
| yeah im not really used to this,like im used to dissin people's clothes and shit its hard to diss motherfuckers you know nothin about besides names and shit. |
that's why i spit in battles about what i know of most of the time peep me,minotti,and sets battle as an example. i like both of them cats but in a battle personals is needed. and you did come off the right track at least with name play
i vote byrd...i just felt he had better punches and wordplay...esco's sounded too elementery but i felt some of his shit towards the end....but i think byrd got this just by the mere fact he's been doin text more and esco is new...but esco got potential....the singapore line was my favorite off byrd's
mani check it
the line that fucked up byrd i think is:I throw unknown flows of pistachio nuts
didn't get that at all.
a flow of nut's
Got Esco dreaming of rainbows and men not sluts
it to show that he is thinking of men?????
the line that fucked up byrd i think is:I throw unknown flows of pistachio nuts
didn't get that at all.
a flow of nut's
Got Esco dreaming of rainbows and men not sluts
it to show that he is thinking of men?????
Vote - Tie, none really stood out, def room for improvement.
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Byrd
Byrd
| QUOTE (BYRD @ Oct 31 2005, 12:25 AM) |
| mani check it the line that fucked up byrd i think is:I throw unknown flows of pistachio nuts didn't get that at all. a flow of nut's Got Esco dreaming of rainbows and men not sluts it to show that he is thinking of men????? |
okay that now makes alot of since. sorry bout dat one slipped pass me lol! that's some funny shit. but that still fall in the category as a punch which i already voted you had more of. from peepin other threads ya'll got i feel ya'll can come much better really. but it looks like you winning anyway
vote: Byrd
better flow and punchlines, IMO, Esco I've seen better from you
better flow and punchlines, IMO, Esco I've seen better from you
can i get mr.fix to break down some of my shit the last time he put out multi-101 and after i read it i was like cool but now bar's of fire spits at least throw one multi
mani your in put too and i thought i had some mult's and really any one's help whould be greatful....
rascar you seen me hear so tell me what you think was it worded right
street's shit the first time dude ever gave me a vote
set's just had mad skills in vocab..
Mig-he just can completely break your shit down
if you have time please let me know so i can have multi's and tigher punches
any one that whould comment neg/pos any thing will help me get better...
rhyme class 101
mani your in put too and i thought i had some mult's and really any one's help whould be greatful....
rascar you seen me hear so tell me what you think was it worded right
street's shit the first time dude ever gave me a vote
set's just had mad skills in vocab..
Mig-he just can completely break your shit down
if you have time please let me know so i can have multi's and tigher punches
any one that whould comment neg/pos any thing will help me get better...
rhyme class 101
Vote Byrd
Neither verse was nice but at least Byrd looked like he tried. Esco, I didn't like your flow, although this is text, when u readin shit out loud it sounds awkward when most of your lines have about 5 or 6 syllables. Your verse seemed more like it was really 8 lines stretched out into 16.
I didn't like byrd 2 much either but at least he got a lil flow going.
Def room 4 improvement, but that's y we here so fuck it....
Neither verse was nice but at least Byrd looked like he tried. Esco, I didn't like your flow, although this is text, when u readin shit out loud it sounds awkward when most of your lines have about 5 or 6 syllables. Your verse seemed more like it was really 8 lines stretched out into 16.
I didn't like byrd 2 much either but at least he got a lil flow going.
Def room 4 improvement, but that's y we here so fuck it....
| QUOTE |
| Hit him broadside like a torpedo Get your top blown like a volcano |
Punches but really weak punches.
| QUOTE |
| You couldn’t land a punch if you threw a bunch |
Weak wordplay.
You also talked about yourself on some lines, cut that down to 1 or 2 lines.
Use more multi's also.
thanks....
yeah those lines he quoted stopped my vote on you byrd. especially (punch and bunch)
you did have flow goin with better syllable words but they weren't added to be a legit multi. like at least 4 or 5 lines you had could had been set up to a multi. i still give you propz so don't think i don't. stay up!
you did have flow goin with better syllable words but they weren't added to be a legit multi. like at least 4 or 5 lines you had could had been set up to a multi. i still give you propz so don't think i don't. stay up!
allright mani then give me an example of a mulit please take a couple of words from my shit and put it in to a multi for me because i guess i'm hard headed or something ....if you got some time ???
because to me the volcano went with the vertigo line and the torpedo was the after effect of the momento and banjo line ...
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at least that how i was viewing it...
because to me the volcano went with the vertigo line and the torpedo was the after effect of the momento and banjo line ...
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at least that how i was viewing it...
man it ain't all serious if there is a prob with my vote you can remove it i'm not trippin
you could had said something like
Don't get *Hauled and (Mangled), (See Dog) *Carry Fire out the Top like Volcano's
burned through the Kango
Inferno, Internal to Ex-Ternal, Flipped the Vertigo Text Steelo is Eqivalent to Torpedo's IT'S JUST ME YO,.... Remeedio
You'll probably Bite my Mani-Mentals/monumentals like Momentos, cuz Mani is Mental, you can't Handle my Line of Stringed Multz like a Broken Banjo's INSTRAMENTALs (<--w/e on that
)
i'm just lazy to rhyme right now but you suppose to have syllables connect like
mangled, volcano, kango
inferno, internal, external, vertigo,
(text=relation to external) steelo, torpedo, me-yo, remeedio(i know i need spell check lol!)
mani-mentals/monumentals, momentos(the candy referrin to bitin), mental of course prolly shouldn't used again, instramentals
that's all i can do for now mayne
let me know if we cool or not cuz i got no beef. i was just tryin to give feedback and vote
you could had said something like
Don't get *Hauled and (Mangled), (See Dog) *Carry Fire out the Top like Volcano's
burned through the Kango
Inferno, Internal to Ex-Ternal, Flipped the Vertigo Text Steelo is Eqivalent to Torpedo's IT'S JUST ME YO,.... Remeedio
You'll probably Bite my Mani-Mentals/monumentals like Momentos, cuz Mani is Mental, you can't Handle my Line of Stringed Multz like a Broken Banjo's INSTRAMENTALs (<--w/e on that
)i'm just lazy to rhyme right now but you suppose to have syllables connect like
mangled, volcano, kango
inferno, internal, external, vertigo,
(text=relation to external) steelo, torpedo, me-yo, remeedio(i know i need spell check lol!)
mani-mentals/monumentals, momentos(the candy referrin to bitin), mental of course prolly shouldn't used again, instramentals
that's all i can do for now mayne
let me know if we cool or not cuz i got no beef. i was just tryin to give feedback and vote
no man where mad cool i just wanted some input and i'm not hateing on the vote and i really like how you put my shit together i'm trying to understand the multi's and now i see what your talking about i thank you for the input it really helps
keep it real fam i don't beef over the net....we just making jokes you had me on the other thread about the thong i thought that was mad funny...
keep it real fam i don't beef over the net....we just making jokes you had me on the other thread about the thong i thought that was mad funny...
thanks fam cuz i hate any type of net so-beef. i love hip hop like a mofoand ain't got no personal issue with no one really. you skilled and i feel an honor for you to take my words in consideration to find out more of wtf i say. thanks
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