200 posts to vote UNLESS YOUR IN THE League, explain your muthafuckin vote, none of this "vote- SD cuz i liked his verse better", explain ur fucking vote.

due Monday OCTOBER 31ST YES NO EXTENSIONS, NO EXCEPTIONS, (vets know i keep movin, i dont wait for procrastinators) Muthafuckas take too long when i give them a week to write verses

No multi user votes, I WILL get tha true meaning to check IP's so no ones getting away with that cornball shit

Bite=Banning. As simple as that(Ask Water, dude is banned for good now)


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no biting-automatic DQ


Sign in both of you, if neither drops a verse, the person who signs in will move on.

FEEL FREE TO PM ME THE VERSES IF YOU DONT WANT YOUR OPPONENT SEEING YOUR SCRIPT, YOU CAN PM ME HERE OR AT HOODBRED. YOUR CHOICE

In...

IN

O catchin a bruisin?? I'll prove it's a possible conclusion
JQ losin...is just another Optical illusion
I'll drop this fool wit 2 hits, put his chin on the floor
Make his moms panic like y'all last week wonderin if I been here before
Nigga I'll bring up past battles, don't front like u don't remember jake
U fuckin suck, even NELLY held his own wit Justin Timberlake
Ya bitch thought I wasn't the truth, needed my nut on her face 2 learn
I viewed it like ya pops did ya moms pussy...a place 2 waste my sperm
You been rappin for years wit a style u claim no one can touch
Still, like broke vaccums that work..can't explain y u suck
Come wit the best hits u got 4 me sucker
Ya punches make themselves look stupid like siamese twins boxin each other
Fuck wit J, ya spine'll split, my rhymes are sick and every line I spit
Make u look stupid like gettin fired before u realize it's time 2 quit
And it's because of this battle hustlers worldwide'll know I'm legit
The way I chopped O up quicker than they could say dimes and nicks

I am in class real quick:


J-lose keeps tabs on his bitch like her name was lo-jack
HE doesn’t know she's an "Easy Share"* like her name was "Kodak"/
In the verse I will expose blaque
If you spit a "Magneto"** flow your shit still wouldn’t "attract"/
You claim to be a lyrical stormer well I'm going to warn ya
aim the bang at your mouth and give you a "Gangsta Grill" like "Dj Drama"***/
I'll break down your whole armor, kill your pride and your honor
J-lose doesn’t kill for millz, white people only kill to eat like Jeffrey Dommer****/
Ponder and wonder, How Optic sees' you’re fake
this week I have won...so to call for a rematch well it’s to late/
I know have the control of your fate
if you really want to be great, get my tape and duplicate

and who the fuck you calling stupid, you are the ruler of that
you took a ruler to sleep to see how long that you slept/

*Kodak's digital cameras are called easy shares
**Magneto from X-Men
***DJ drama is a DJ from The A and all his mix tapes are called gangsta grillz
****I know ya'll know dommer the dude eating all the niggas

first of all, stop usin <****> those to explain ur raps (just make sense)

with that bein said... imma havta giv this to my boy J.Q. for eatin Opticals food

J.Q. kept a nice flow, he rhymed, had some multi line rhymes and didnt need to explain what he was talking about... maybe next time Optical

vote: J.Q.

I'm not sure how things work on this site. But AM I ALLOWED TO VOTE.

my vote-JQ

had better punches, sort of, had way more multies and the flow was more solid, some nice wordplay in there.

flow:JQ
Multies:JQ
Personals:tie
punches:tie
Wordplay:JQ
vote:JQ

JQ came out strong on this one, but i lafed at every thing that Optical said, and i could flow it.

Vote: Optical

2-1 JQ

Vote: J.Q.

(No explanation needed)

Multi: J.Q
Vocab: Optical
Flow: J.Q
Punches: Optical
Enjoyment: Optical

J.Q came nice with the flow..but that isnt enough...he needs to incorporate more punches to his verse....was nearly a tie but having said that my vote goes to Optical

His vote dont count anyway OP!

JQ did his thing ... but Opt was a monster a few of his bars truely had my laugthin on.. big up Op.

Rhyme: Op
Punches: Op
Multi: JQ
Originality: Op
Enjoy: Op

Vote: Op.. easy overstand.

dam hit im up doc opt just liked the flow j.q. did have a nice drop but optical

got it on lock

VOTE DOC OPT

4-3 OPtic

4-3 optical not 4-1

thats what i said..

multi-tie
punches-op
flow-jq
creativity-op
enjoyment-op
vote-op

jq came good decent punches but ops was more the type of verse to make someone laugh which is good

the op man wins

lmao @ u having to sway to finally get some votes.

and far as my line go,

imagine siamese twins boxin each other, it'd look pretty stupid wouldn't it?? well that's what i picture when i read your verses. and unlike u, i don't need cliffnotes 2 explain myself.

every decent spitter in this thread voted 4 me, the rest were either mad i voted against them or mad i beat them.

aim the bang at your mouth and give you a "Gangsta Grill" like "Dj Drama

^ that shit was not only corny, it made no sense

and since when does 'slept' rhyme wit 'that'??

lmao @ the amount of dickridin allowed in this league

huh????




well whatever, the battle's over, BLNT