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streets disciple
5 votes to win
200 posts to vote UNLESS YOUR IN THE TOURNEY

due Sunday october 2nd, YES NO EXTENSIONS, TWO DAYS TO WRITE 16, NO EXCEPTIONS, (vets know i keep movin, i dont wait for procrastinators)

No multi user votes, I WILL get tha true meaning to check IP's so no ones getting away with that cornball shit

16 lines

no biting-automatic DQ


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Robbie G
In...
VERSEital
Ga head crack ya beers and spark ya COCOA
This battle gon be easier than my first and that was a NO SHOW
Get at this mutherfucker like FAT JOE did to 50 on FO FO
Give his ass a beating way worse than PO PO
HONESTLY ROBBIE G PROBABLY Gon be WOBBLEY
He's a discgrace to his own country like BOTTLED TEA
Seen a pic of his girl the back of her legs looked like COTTAGE CHEESE
He'd have to diss himself thats the only way he'd ever TAKE SHOT'S At G'z
He tried to be like OBIE TRICE except he's REAL NAME NO LYRICS
VERSE get's hated on so much even if he wins HE"LL GAIN NO MERITS
Ya'll seen them talking birds this dude lost to a PARROT
When He beat Jiffo it caused MASS HYSTERIA DUDE
U winning that battle was a bigger surprise than CAFETERIA FOOD
Mistaken for a member of BONE cause my raps BURIED YOU
He could fuck up a WET DREAM no way this KIDS TIGHT
This CINDARELLA story is over the clock just struck MIDNIGHT

VERSE






streets disciple
Robbie

I see you down there, drop or ur gonna be labeled a no show today

I wont give you an extension
Robbie G
what you mean?........i got ages yet...
streets disciple
QUOTE (Robbie G @ Oct 2 2005, 03:47 PM)
what you mean?........i got ages yet...

due Sunday october 2nd

^^Did you read that?
Robbie G
^^^^^yep.......still sunday though........got like 9 hrs american time....what the rush.....is theer a time-limit??
Robbie G
I’m causing more revolutions than a rubix cube/CHEck my avy dude/
I’m removin’ dudes from they imaginary thrones, I’ma prove it dude/
mayn, how you ever gon spit fire, if you keep sallowin’ water?/*
u getting off his dick, bout as likely as Kate Moss havin’ a drug-free daughter/**
I’m gon harass ya father 24/7, have him shook, before I hand him a 187/
…and that’s the only way ya daddy’s seein’ 6 figures, all be it from heaven/***
Verse you’ve said “fuck this text bullshit’”…it don’t compare to real, not nearly/
….well I guess that shit ^^^ you posted categorically proves ya theory/
you say you hot on a stage spittin a free, mayn you talkin’ maad bullshit/
the only way you could “move a crowd” is dumpin’ anthrax in a moshpitt/
damn right I cause hysteria, like “shit robbie handed jiff a loss?!?!?”/
whereas you couldn’t cause a freanzy, wearin’ a backpack in Kings Cross/****
verse be like: “hey, nobody loves me!”, man I’ma silence ya whining/
have streets ban you from double x l, and leave water pining/
“verse”, I respect you bout as much as a Mexican do a state bound-ry/
this Cinderella story aint ending here, “robbie shall go to round-three”/

* -- always on each others dicks....
** -- english model who has recently been cort using drugs...has a druggy boyfriend and reportadley neglects daughter...
*** -- says his dad makes 6 figures.... dry.gif
**** --- london train station....
mr jiffo
kinda close

some of verse's lines cracked me up (im still laugin now, my head is fucekd 2nite laugh.gif ), but i'ma give it to robbie......dispite the flipping

QUOTE
mayn, how you ever gon spit fire, if you keep sallowin’ water?/*

laugh.gif ohmy.gif laugh.gif

vote = R dot G dot
SilvitaLikeWHOA
verse:
QUOTE
Ga head crack ya beers and spark ya COCOA
This battle gon be easier than my first and that was a NO SHOW
Get at this mutherfucker like FAT JOE did to 50 on FO FO
Give his ass a beating way worse than PO PO

^not feelin the opener..
QUOTE
HONESTLY ROBBIE G PROBABLY Gon be WOBBLEY
He's a discgrace to his own country like BOTTLED TEA

^is aight
QUOTE
Seen a pic of his girl the back of her legs looked like COTTAGE CHEESE
He'd have to diss himself thats the only way he'd ever TAKE SHOT'S At G'z

^first line is kinda funny.. but irrelevant to me cause u suppose to be dissin Robbie.. 2nd line almost looks like he givin PROPS to Robbie.. callin him G? blink.gif
QUOTE
He tried to be like OBIE TRICE except he's REAL NAME NO LYRICS
VERSE get's hated on so much even if he wins HE"LL GAIN NO MERITS
Ya'll seen them talking birds this dude lost to a PARROT

^first line is nice IMO.. 2nd mightve been sarcastic but still looks like hes dissin himself.. and 3rd line is just sense-less filler
QUOTE
When He beat Jiffo it caused MASS HYSTERIA DUDE
U winning that battle was a bigger surprise than CAFETERIA FOOD

^cafeteria food? ummm.. no
QUOTE
Mistaken for a member of BONE cause my raps BURIED YOU
He could fuck up a WET DREAM no way this KIDS TIGHT
This CINDARELLA story is over the clock just struck MIDNIGHT

^not feelin the closer

robbie:
QUOTE
I’m causing more revolutions than a rubix cube/CHEck my avy dude/
I’m removin’ dudes from they imaginary thrones, I’ma prove it dude/
mayn, how you ever gon spit fire, if you keep sallowin’ water?/*
u getting off his dick, bout as likely as Kate Moss havin’ a drug-free daughter/**

^decent opener.. i like the revolutions/rubix cube/ che comparison... then it seems like "dude" was in there a bit too much.. but the 3rd line is nice too.. the 4th ehh..
QUOTE
I’m gon harass ya father 24/7, have him shook, before I hand him a 187/
…and that’s the only way ya daddy’s seein’ 6 figures, all be it from heaven/***
Verse you’ve said “fuck this text bullshit’”…it don’t compare to real, not nearly/
….well I guess that shit ^^^ you posted categorically proves ya theory/

^first 2 lines i wasnt feelin.. next 2 was hot for the personal
QUOTE
you say you hot on a stage spittin a free, mayn you talkin’ maad bullshit/
the only way you could “move a crowd” is dumpin’ anthrax in a moshpitt/
damn right I cause hysteria, like “shit robbie handed jiff a loss?!?!?”/
whereas you couldn’t cause a freanzy, wearin’ a backpack in Kings Cross/****

^not feelin the bullshit/moshpit rhyme.. (and not tryna accuse of bitin.. but im quite sure i seen the "move a crowd/anthrax" line) the rest was ehhh
QUOTE
verse be like: “hey, nobody loves me!”, man I’ma silence ya whining/
have streets ban you from double x l, and leave water pining/
“verse”, I respect you bout as much as a Mexican do a state bound-ry/
this Cinderella story aint ending here, “robbie shall go to round-three”/

^first 2 lines ehh... last 2 was tight.. nice closer

vote: Robbie G.. (pending some research im conducting ph34r.gif )
Robbie G
QUOTE
(pending some research im conducting  )


wink.gif ....trust....even if somewhere out there someone has used the concept.....i aint bitten it.....

serious it aint my style......i mean ive seen some lines which i kick myself cos i aint thought of it,....but would never bite...trust.
Robbie G
buuuuyyyuiudhiuHDuksananssxOAPkoIASHUBZJNNZMjHSCJCJDJXJXXHJDCCmp.

bump for votes..
BYRD
co sign with jiff verse had some good lines but robbie just edged him out a little bye the closer.........

VOTE R.G.
Robbie G
ayt thanks for votes......3-0 me so far

bump for votes.
the one
Co-sign with Vita, someone said that anthrax line last week. No lie.
Robbie G
QUOTE
Co-sign with Vita, someone said that anthrax line last week. No lie.


^^^^^^read above...the one...you gon vote?
Hytola
Not voting til i find out about the anthrax line.
aMiLlIoN sTyLeS
it's sad...... lets ya know how much bitch shit goes on round here. When someone ups their game.....you gotta question it...... of course I'm on ya side Robbie, hopefully ya all good.... cause if it ain't



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Hytola
QUOTE (aMiLlIoN sTyLeS @ Oct 3 2005, 02:11 AM)
it's sad...... lets ya know how much bitch shit goes on round here. When someone ups their game.....you gotta question it...... of course I'm on ya side Robbie, hopefully ya all good.... cause if it ain't



sad.gif

Same here.
streets disciple
QUOTE (aMiLlIoN sTyLeS @ Oct 2 2005, 09:11 PM)
it's sad...... lets ya know how much bitch shit goes on round here. When someone ups their game.....you gotta question it...... of course I'm on ya side Robbie, hopefully ya all good.... cause if it ain't



sad.gif

Well check it, this dude went from wack to decent, thats why cats are questioning his ass. You dotn elevate that quickly, sorry son, where have you been, you know about the mass amount of biters that were on this site before, you know that cats tend to bite,but I agree, dont put an accusation up there without showing proof
aMiLlIoN sTyLeS
^^^^ nah Streets, ya got it wrong.... I agree wit ya.... that's why it's sad.... I ain't saying it's fucked up that he's a suspect. I'm saying this boards that fucked that you gotta question it.... believe me with Jiff, I was like DAMN, but I'll give him the benefit of the doubt.... but in a weird way... lets just say I wouldn't be surprised if something came up....
MiGrAinE
QUOTE
Ga head crack ya beers and spark ya COCOA
This battle gon be easier than my first and that was a NO SHOW

haha, ok opener...

QUOTE
Get at this mutherfucker like FAT JOE did to 50 on FO FO
Give his ass a beating way worse than PO PO

...but then you did this, weak..

QUOTE
HONESTLY ROBBIE G PROBABLY Gon be WOBBLEY
He's a discgrace to his own country like BOTTLED TEA

no..

QUOTE
Seen a pic of his girl the back of her legs looked like COTTAGE CHEESE
He'd have to diss himself thats the only way he'd ever TAKE SHOT'S At G'z

um, first line is a played concept... 2nd line is confusing, are you saying that he's a gangsta, and him dissing himself is taking a shot at one? i dont get it...

QUOTE
He tried to be like OBIE TRICE except he's REAL NAME NO LYRICS
VERSE get's hated on so much even if he wins HE"LL GAIN NO MERITS

blah...

QUOTE
Ya'll seen them talking birds this dude lost to a PARROT
When He beat Jiffo it caused MASS HYSTERIA DUDE

no..

QUOTE
U winning that battle was a bigger surprise than CAFETERIA FOOD
Mistaken for a member of BONE cause my raps BURIED YOU

ehh... naw, not feelin it..

QUOTE
He could fuck up a WET DREAM no way this KIDS TIGHT
This CINDARELLA story is over the clock just struck MIDNIGHT

aiight closer.. hit hard enough..

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QUOTE
I’m causing more revolutions than a rubix cube/CHEck my avy dude/
I’m removin’ dudes from they imaginary thrones, I’ma prove it dude/

first line was ok, second line was ehh...

QUOTE
mayn, how you ever gon spit fire, if you keep sallowin’ water?/*
u getting off his dick, bout as likely as Kate Moss havin’ a drug-free daughter/**

good personal...

QUOTE
I’m gon harass ya father 24/7, have him shook, before I hand him a 187/
…and that’s the only way ya daddy’s seein’ 6 figures, all be it from heaven/***

no..

QUOTE
Verse you’ve said “fuck this text bullshit’”…it don’t compare to real, not nearly/
….well I guess that shit ^^^ you posted categorically proves ya theory/

it was ok, didnt hit that hard

QUOTE
you say you hot on a stage spittin a free, mayn you talkin’ maad bullshit/
the only way you could “move a crowd” is dumpin’ anthrax in a moshpitt/

played concept..

QUOTE
damn right I cause hysteria, like “shit robbie handed jiff a loss?!?!?”/
whereas you couldn’t cause a freanzy, wearin’ a backpack in Kings Cross/****

not feelin it, but i didnt know flipping was allowed...

QUOTE
verse be like: “hey, nobody loves me!”, man I’ma silence ya whining/
have streets ban you from double x l, and leave water pining/

uh... no..

QUOTE
“verse”, I respect you bout as much as a Mexican do a state bound-ry/
this Cinderella story aint ending here, “robbie shall go to round-three”/

not feelin it as a closer, and flipping again...

punches- tie
personals- robbie
flow- verseital
multis- verseital
overall- tie

vote: TIE, i wasnt really feeling either verse.. ayo verseital, its nice and all you just type and post, but i'm tellin you, if you put 5 more minutes into what you post your shit would come off so much harder.. just a suggestion homie..
streets disciple
4-1 Robbie G
lefty two guns
* steps into thread and pulls verse aside*

verse, let me holla at you for a second homie...we're over the fact that you basically key your verses...the novelty wears off, its almost like a handicap...like i'll be readin your shit like 'that was a decent line for a free", but honestly, thats not the rraction you want heads to have reading a battle verse...i know thats your whole style 'i key my shit all quick, blah blah' but in a tourney nobody gives a fuck, its about wordplay and witty ass punches...then multis, then flow...and re-fucking-lax with the caps, we know the end of your lines rhyme....your verses are tight for quick keys but against streets or jack or yours truly that shit aint goin fly...and this is constructive, take it or leave it wink.gif ...ok, so now for my vote...
verse had some well executed lines like i said, but just not enough behind them...robbie just had the better battle verse, so well thought out punches...my vote breakdown is pretty much the same as vita's if you need a breakdown...


vote-G
aMiLlIoN sTyLeS
Robbie G advances to spit on another verse rolleyes.gif
Robbie G
vita untill you find evidence ..... retract ya statement cos people be trippin now.........lok i don't know how to get it accross but i aint bitten anything....and you can't pressume i have been just cos ive elevated......the concept used aint that special......and it could ahve been said before.....i dont know...all i know is i never bit it....real talk....ive serche d thru some threads and the only mention of anthrax was me saying: "im a dangerous male, like you got anthrax in ya post" and finesse referred to a chemical* and the chemical was anthrax which he stated at the bottom of that battle........other than that get some ev and ....prove suttin cos it aint true and i resent all this hit bein talke d boyt we when theres no evidence....my game ahs elevated fats....but why shud i have to prove it aint natural..peace.
Setsotama
Vote: Robbie G

In personals and punches
Robbie G
ayt,.....thank for vote sets....that's 6-1...this over..peace.
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