5 votes to win
200 posts to vote UNLESS YOUR IN THE TOURNEY

due Sunday october 2nd, YES NO EXTENSIONS, TWO DAYS TO WRITE 16, NO EXCEPTIONS, (vets know i keep movin, i dont wait for procrastinators)

No multi user votes, I WILL get tha true meaning to check IP's so no ones getting away with that cornball shit

16 lines

no biting-automatic DQ


Sign in both of you, if neither drops a verse, the person who signs in will move on.

FEEL FREE TO PM ME THE VERSES IF YOU DONT WANT YOUR OPPONENT SEEING YOUR SCRIPT, YOU CAN PM ME HERE OR AT HOODBRED. YOUR CHOICE.

THIZZ-IN

Up In This Bitch

its the kid against the snowman...this shits fixed so get with the program
fuck de'feet'ing you, when im done, you goin have no hands
Rascar, "he who unleashes fire from above", do you remember?
your sick? you got it confused with Influenza*
you aint got rhythm...for Rascar, or to box with him
u shud b on Uno's list...all ur verses are "frost bitten"
you aint heard...ur "tricks"** on Ras like "low-blows"
i spit that crack, feedin offa its the only way you "stone-cold"
you dont wanna war with me, i assure you b, ill do more than beat you
but since you're so dope, youll excuse if i fall asleep, too
to prove to you...that im holding the belt now
my hot flows corrupting ur system, u can call it a melt down
self crowned..hella proud, i hold that Mac down//you bit off more than
you could chew of my shit, so you spittin it back out..
my drops are nice...got so much beef i usually draw for my pocket knife
ill bring the fight and slice you: since i am known for rockin Ice..

blyaaaah...i kno this jackfrost but imma just have to rush ma shit

man...sorry.

*Influenza as in a cold...ironicaly cuz hes a snowman
**tricks as in tricks and low-blows..so dirty tricks
and trick as his hoe givin me "low-blows"..as in a blowjob

this homo got blessed with a noshow, but count on a pro to show/
him a rappin is a lie, just wait for his nose to grow/
I'ma kill this man cuz grabbin the tech is a habit/
that'll bounce your ass side to side worse than Jessica Rabit/*
you're doomed Rascar cuz all of my rappin is past par/
zoom by you in a fast car and leave ya ass charred/
this man's done beat him so bad you'll be my grandson/
and he constantly cuffs his sac just to make sure he has one/
he has over 2000 posts, I swear this guy has no life man/
obviously only loves two things his keyboard and his right hand/
unless your left handed if so thats my mistake bitch/
but he prolly jacks off so fast you would think it's the Matrix/
I'm on the yellow brick road and on the way smashin your spinal/
what I'm sayin is I've never had an easier path to the finals/
we don't even need binoculars to see I've beat you from a far/
take the 'R' off ya name cuz all I'm leavin you is 'a scar'/


*From Who Framed Roger Rabbit, you'd have to know the movie to know what I'm talkin about.

Flow - Jack

Punches - Tie

Personals - Jack

Wordplay - Jack

Overall - Tie

Vote - Jack

seen betta from both but I feel Jack edged him out....

vote:jack..

ras i think a lil over emphasis on the frost/snow/ice theme...too many fillers
jack was funny, good flow etc.......

i had high hopes for the battle...lil disappointed..

Flow - Jack
Multi's - tied
wordplay - Jack (Ras was nice with the nameplay too)
punches - Jack
personals - None

Vote - Jack

dam ras jack got you by a hair the flow and more punches

vote JAck

When i reas Ras' verse i thought he'd get it, but Jack came with harder punches and a neater flow, close, but i'm sure of my vote.

Jack

5-0.... Jack moves on

*decent battle*