VERSEital
Sep 21 2005, 06:38 PM
They say you spit tight but with that wack shit u'll get MURDERED
RAININ MEN bullshit that's ur hit U started dancin when u HEARD IT
He thinks he's important I think he's a FLASHLIGHT COP
Talkin bout GAY BARS when that was your LAST NIGHT SPOT
I'll expose ya ass then this TRASH MIGHT STOP
I slide through the metal detectors take out the PIN in my PLASTIC GLOCK
Murk you do a song about it, the booth filled with the BADDEST POT
His boy 1ST BLAZE from OHIO and he wanna talk shit about MILWAUKEE
The Home of Jeffrey Dahmer plus you'll hear more gats bust than TALKING
Dont get caught WALKING AFTER DARK especially with an AVERAGE HEART
Pay a crackhead 5 dollars to tear ya ASS APART
He's snitching on MULTI USERS we found out thats what HE IS
All over NAS's dick then he wanna talk shit about THIZZ
R.I.P. Mac Dre Yo Thizz I'll POP A PILL FOR YOU
Disciple A PANHANDLER slash RAPPER here's a DOLLAR BILL FOR U
This is the end for you the REAL Double XL APPLAUSE
Cause you could never be STREET with that wack shit comin out of ya JAWS
MUTHERFUCKER YOU DONT KNOW SHIT QUIT MAKIN STUFF UP YOU ONLY LYING TO YOURSELF HOMEY FAGGOT ASS MULTI. YO GO BACK TO JAWS YOU WERE HOT THEN
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MiGrAinE
Sep 21 2005, 06:40 PM
Da_thick_1
Sep 21 2005, 06:42 PM
VERSEital
Sep 21 2005, 06:45 PM
Yo Migrane & Da Thick Lets Get Some Feedback with those faces
VERSE
Anonymous Roundz
Sep 21 2005, 06:46 PM
Disciple A PANHANDLER slash RAPPER here's a DOLLAR BILL FOR U
This is the end for you the REAL Double XL APPLAUSE
Cause you could never be STREET with that wack shit comin out of ya JAWS
if u had better wording that cud have been hot
the rest was eehh
Da_thick_1
Sep 21 2005, 06:47 PM
it was comical thats the feedback
VERSEital
Sep 21 2005, 06:48 PM
Yeah well compared to the bullshit he spit against me(He probably wasn't trying

, thats what he'll say) THIS SHOULD LET HIM KNOW
VERSE
DaGeneral
Sep 21 2005, 06:51 PM
yo verse u had 'some' goodlines in there...expect that to be the only goodfeedback youll get.....too much hatin goin on here....
VERSEital
Sep 21 2005, 06:55 PM
OH I ALREADY NO THAT GENERAL. ESPECIALLY WITH STREETS AND HIS FANCLUB
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MiGrAinE
Sep 21 2005, 06:55 PM
feedback...
well from what i've seen from you this is some of your best work most likely kos its driven by anger, but i've seen streets murk 3 guys in one day (myself included). he really aint try with that diss on you homie, so if you wanna battle dude then keep this intensity going but make sure everything hits hard, no filler, just bring straight heat..
DaGeneral
Sep 21 2005, 06:59 PM
^^co sign
your VERSE seemed to be half filler lines
you need to hit him with punch after punch!
or at least hotline after hotline......
juggalorepresentative
Sep 21 2005, 07:10 PM
| QUOTE (VERSEital @ Sep 21 2005, 06:38 PM) |
They say you spit tight but with that wack shit u'll get MURDERED RAININ MEN bullshit that's ur hit U started dancin when u HEARD IT He thinks he's important I think he's a FLASHLIGHT COP Talkin bout GAY BARS when that was your LAST NIGHT SPOT I'll expose ya ass then this TRASH MIGHT STOP I slide through the metal detectors take out the PIN in my PLASTIC GLOCK Murk you do a song about it, the booth filled with the BADDEST POT His boy 1ST BLAZE from OHIO and he wanna talk shit about MILWAUKEE The Home of Jeffrey Dahmer plus you'll hear more gats bust than TALKING Dont get caught WALKING AFTER DARK especially with an AVERAGE HEART Pay a crackhead 5 dollars to tear ya ASS APART He's snitching on MULTI USERS we found out thats what HE IS All over NAS's dick then he wanna talk shit about THIZZ R.I.P. Mac Dre Yo Thizz I'll POP A PILL FOR YOU Disciple A PANHANDLER slash RAPPER here's a DOLLAR BILL FOR U This is the end for you the REAL Double XL APPLAUSE Cause you could never be STREET with that wack shit comin out of ya JAWS
MUTHERFUCKER YOU DONT KNOW SHIT QUIT MAKIN STUFF UP YOU ONLY LYING TO YOURSELF HOMEY FAGGOT ASS MULTI. YO GO BACK TO JAWS YOU WERE HOT THEN
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HEY YO' VERSE you from milwaukee? im in madison i think i heard of you before you know a cat named profound?
VERSEital
Sep 21 2005, 07:15 PM
Juggalore Im also in Madison, I used to stay in Milwaukee U GOT BEATS DOGG?
VERSE
juggalorepresentative
Sep 21 2005, 07:52 PM
| QUOTE (VERSEital @ Sep 21 2005, 07:15 PM) |
Juggalore Im also in Madison, I used to stay in Milwaukee U GOT BEATS DOGG?
VERSE |
naw i ain't got no beats dog im startin to fuck with logic pro a lil bit making some shit on that but my melodies are weak as fuck i havn't made anything yet that i'd fart over much less rap on
streets disciple
Sep 21 2005, 09:12 PM

dawg that was the wackest verse ive ever read in my life
you need help in writing, honestly i know you put ur heart and effort to this, but damn, this shit is still wack. You do realize I can murk you if I try? do you want streetsie to try? because i went negative 30 percent on you last time,

and STILL had the better diss
your just wack kid, you give white ppl a bad name in rap, just quit while your a head
VERSEital
Sep 21 2005, 09:17 PM
HAHAHAH I knew you were gonna say some shit like that. NO MATTER WHAT I POST U CALL IT WACK AND THEN SAY U DIDNT TRY. GO BACK TO JAWS GO BACK TO GHOSTWRITING FOR 1ST BLAZE. I DONT GIVE A FUCK WHAT YOU THINK I LIKED MY VERSE AND I DO THIS SHIT FOR ME STR8 FREESTLYES
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