Robbie G
Sep 21 2005, 03:32 PM
I want everyone to hear so I’m spittin this vociferous/
Rhymes grimier than a 80 year old clitoris, it as clear as this/
I come crazy wit it like im spittin scitzophrenic/
Im rappin circles round ya like u geocentric/
Bringin’ them lyrics to tha table you’re bound to get ripped/
Cos your rhymes are wack like you beatin on ya script/
You claimin u rusty, just an exuse for how weak u come/
Ill exacerbate tha situation and leave u in tha sun/
Ill end ya face and ya career, watch how I multi task/
How you gonna win if u only spittin blood, may I ask?/
You getting too big for ya boots, need bringin’ down to earth/
So im stompin on you bitch, till u buried in tha earth/
My bullets paralyse, so im immobilisin’ mr. jiffo/
Turn ya body rigid like your name be “mr. stiffo”/ …
they it is jiff....respond asap.
mr jiffo
Sep 21 2005, 04:15 PM
okay, a few mins
mr jiffo
Sep 21 2005, 04:23 PM
| QUOTE (mr jiffo @ Sep 21 2005, 04:15 PM) |
| okay, a few mins |
You think you’ll be seein me? I’ll leave ya with gunned eyes/
I aim for ya pupils….like you teach at columbine/
But don’t claim you’ll shoot back…no need to run lies/
Closest you came to touchin heat….was reaching for sunshine/
And a battle? When it comes to war, ya mans are retreating/
Ya lines I’ll run through, my war’s an art like sun tzu/
I guess the G’s for general…coz he recently sonned you/
Treat rap like ya love life…quick to hand you a beating/
My standards increasing, can you handle this, weakling?
This the UK boy….only one man here can be king/
Now take che out ya avy….you known for wack rap/
Only ‘revolutions’ you’ll see is when I twist ya cap back/
U aint no nas, don’t ever tell me this stupid kid’s live/
He deserves one mic as much as kim did 5/
crucifixio
Sep 21 2005, 04:28 PM
You think you’ll be seein me? I’ll leave ya with gunned eyes/
I aim for ya pupils….like you teach at columbine/

vote Jiff ^^ n theres' my reason
Crucifixio Has Voted
p.s. ya multies-syllable rhymes have elevated
Rascar
Sep 21 2005, 04:31 PM
Robbies elevatin but Jiffo got this
aMiLlIoN sTyLeS
Sep 21 2005, 04:38 PM
| QUOTE |
I want everyone to hear so I’m spittin this vociferous/ Rhymes grimier than a 80 year old clitoris, it as clear as this/ I come crazy wit it like im spittin scitzophrenic/ Im rappin circles round ya like u geocentric/ Bringin’ them lyrics to tha table you’re bound to get ripped/ Cos your rhymes are wack like you beatin on ya script/ You claimin u rusty, just an exuse for how weak u come/ Ill exacerbate tha situation and leave u in tha sun/ Ill end ya face and ya career, watch how I multi task/ How you gonna win if u only spittin blood, may I ask?/ You getting too big for ya boots, need bringin’ down to earth/ So im stompin on you bitch, till u buried in tha earth/ My bullets paralyse, so im immobilisin’ mr. jiffo/ Turn ya body rigid like your name be “mr. stiffo”/ …
they it is jiff....respond asap. |
Seriously I'm not hating, but this could be the worse verse I've seen from ya. It seems forced.
| QUOTE |
I want everyone to hear so I’m spittin this vociferous/ Rhymes grimier than a 80 year old clitoris, it as clear as this/ |
*could be jus me, (I know what your saying) but I don't understand this*
| QUOTE |
I come crazy wit it like im spittin scitzophrenic/ Im rappin circles round ya like u geocentric/ |
*top line ya need more creativity (too simple, not interesting)*
| QUOTE |
Bringin’ them lyrics to tha table you’re bound to get ripped/ Cos your rhymes are wack like you beatin on ya script/ |
*sorry, but this one is jus weak*
| QUOTE |
You getting too big for ya boots, need bringin’ down to earth/ So im stompin on you bitch, till u buried in tha earth/ |
*sounds like some 5yr old shit there*
Vote - Jiffo (thanks for tha shout out)
Robbie G
Sep 21 2005, 04:43 PM
hmmmmm mic general voted against me.........what a surprise.....you can count that cos it obvious where this battle goin....but this dude jus don like me.....and if you cant understand a word mic... www.dictionary.com
to be honest i knew before this that id lose.....but i jus want practice......mr jiffo...you rusty??? come on man that verse was fire....id have voted for you too.....
| QUOTE |
Closest you came to touchin heat….was reaching for sunshine/
|
that killed me...
nyways......thanks for the battle.......
oh yeah....fuck mic dic
aMiLlIoN sTyLeS
Sep 21 2005, 04:59 PM
at least I can spell... *Schizophrenic*
"I don't care if ya don't count my vote"... a blank screen could beat that shit
aMiLlIoN sTyLeS
Sep 21 2005, 05:02 PM
| QUOTE |
| oh yeah....fuck mic dic |
so hostile... why don't ya have a little bit of tea and crumpettes and watch some bbc, so ya can relax
Water
Sep 21 2005, 05:02 PM
Even though Jiffo didn't vote on my battle with toxic
I'll still vote on his thread.
vote: jiffo....Reason.....the obvious.
Robbie G
Sep 21 2005, 05:03 PM
ayt mic im sick of you..........if im so wack lets have a rematch.........im done for tonight...but tomoro afternoon ill be on...what u say?
aMiLlIoN sTyLeS
Sep 21 2005, 05:06 PM
nah it wouldn't be good for record.... I'm trying to get on Hytola's good side and battle "good mutha-fuckas"

. Plus I don't wanna hear your "crying", your "complaints", and your "excuses" on another ass whoopin. Remember you faggots started it......
mr jiffo
Sep 21 2005, 05:07 PM
| QUOTE (Water @ Sep 21 2005, 05:02 PM) |
Even though Jiffo didn't vote on my battle with toxic I'll still vote on his thread. vote: jiffo....Reason.....the obvious. |
my bad, if its still open, ill return the favour
Robbie G
Sep 21 2005, 05:08 PM
ok sit on ure win.
aMiLlIoN sTyLeS
Sep 21 2005, 05:10 PM
and swallow your loss
streets disciple
Sep 21 2005, 05:11 PM
^^dont vote on his battle, hes winning like 14-0
and my vote is jiffo
the pupils line alone shattered robbie g's verse
Robbie G
Sep 21 2005, 05:12 PM
| QUOTE |
| and swallow your loss |
like ive said in the other thread i accept u won...
aMiLlIoN sTyLeS
Sep 21 2005, 05:14 PM
and followed it with "it's fucked up on how long you took".
Water
Sep 21 2005, 05:15 PM
| QUOTE (streets disciple @ Sep 21 2005, 05:11 PM) |
^^dont vote on his battle, hes winning like 14-0
and my vote is jiffo
the pupils line alone shattered robbie g's verse |
aight, aight, aight,. Well atleast read it.
Robbie G
Sep 21 2005, 05:19 PM
| QUOTE |
| and followed it with "it's fucked up on how long you took". |
well i think it was......but just cos i said it....dont mean im sayin' if u hadnt taken so long then i woulda won...just that it wasnt right...ayt...hey i CAN rhyme.
aMiLlIoN sTyLeS
Sep 21 2005, 05:22 PM
I'm glad ya got confidence... but if ya can't take criticism it "ain't a loss here". I ain't never said you couldn't rhyme. I jus think outta the stuff I've read of yours. That "one" rhyme wasn't good, not even mediocre, ok it was bad. If ya want to take it personal, that's your problem.
Robbie G
Sep 21 2005, 05:28 PM
i dont get u?.....taking it personal?wtf u pretty much said the whole verse was garbage....which i think was a bit harsh.....lookin back i can say it was pretty shit...but it werent bad enuff for ya...to totally deface it...
aMiLlIoN sTyLeS
Sep 21 2005, 05:32 PM
I broke it down... I even said, "it might be jus me", "sorry", and saying "out of all your rhymes" meaning not all wack.... you're not gonna stay hungry or get better if kats "surgar coat" it for ya.
Robbie G
Sep 21 2005, 05:38 PM
all right.....lets end it now...i aint got a beef wit ya i dont think u have wit me?,......
i accept u jus expressin ya opinion....and believe me i taken it on board...
ayt?
MiGrAinE
Sep 21 2005, 05:41 PM
vote: JIFFO
too much self rep by robbie g.. and i understand wanting to expand your vocab, but dont sacrifice big words for punches...
Robbie G
Sep 21 2005, 05:43 PM
| QUOTE |
| too much self rep by robbie g.. and i understand wanting to expand your vocab, but dont sacrifice big words for punches... |
aight thanks for advice..
Anonymous Roundz
Sep 21 2005, 06:36 PM
You think you’ll be seein me? I’ll leave ya with gunned eyes/
I aim for ya pupils….like you teach at columbine/
But don’t claim you’ll shoot back…no need to run lies/
Closest you came to touchin heat….was reaching for sunshine/

:wub:that made my dick hard
new site, new tourny me and jiff, battle league week one
VERSEital
Sep 21 2005, 07:05 PM
Yo Robbie G's VERSE was choppy as explained above
Jiffo spit heat as usual as explained above
VOTE-JIFFO
VERSE
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