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first to five votes

ill drop my verse in a little bit(halfway done)

sounds stellar...come with it, i'm feeling wordy

ight....

Yo tell your mother that u love her,look in her eyes, and give her your goodbyes
Its simple u battlin a general&that red dot aint a pimple its my scope between your eyes
One shot will have u on the ground,head no where to be found, layin in brain fluid
So leave now heres a headstart,my advice is be smart, dont fuck around and act stupid
But you already accepted this cat,and thats a fact like sayin im the best
And murkin you is now one of my to do's,till yo heads at rest,on my desk
And I need to stop! cause Im hittin you w/more 'Hot Lines'then TV after 12 o clock
But i still got more shells i have to cock, in 'these gunz',so heres more rappin
And this kid talk about gunz but like phone sex,hes all talk no action
Goin up against a general with a full battallion,and this aint just rappin
Its me,I leave dudes with problems,fuck it,go see Maury
And back off of me,cause this dude got sticky fingaz,and he aint a thief
While i stay grounded in elevation,mom cant save you,ima shred this veteran
And no need to see you father this weekend,cause you just met him!
Now let me murk my kidz 'sixth sense' till its giving you misdirection
So when you 'see dead people' you wont realise its your own reflection

general aint never had a girl, they wont be seen with the worst/
look, dude even has to force rhymes...just to be in his verse/
and when it comes to plays on words you're the nicest...hardly/
cuz lefty will "torture" house, then "torture" your charred body/
dudes the general? i'll make your whole army die now/
it's ap"parent" this kid cant even "raise" eyebrows/
abort his clan...a winning streak? yours is shortest, fam/
i'mma have you with more "red-skin" than a clinton portis fan/
smash this bitch into more "bits" than my old sega genesis/
so when i say he got "pms"...i'm not talking private messages/
when it comes to broads, you can say they adore me and my posts/
but they look into your "eyes" and can tell you're "cornea" than most/
proceed with this cremation, so when i buck, just duck, slut/
shit... i'll win with abbreviations, everybody wants you to s.t.f.u./
da general and losing, yeah i can see you 2 are acquainted/
cuz now he's "going out" with a loss, but will deny that they "dated"



votes

aww i miss you

of course
this shit fucking sickens me

man, we're playing around...dont get it twisted

its not the gay shit,its the vote

D.A. I feel what ya trying to say, but ya gotta be more creative in wording ya lines. Like Lefty said... you be forcing shit.


Oh yeah, vote Lefty

well, i dont mean to hate but i'd be upset with myself if you got one vote...and thats not people hating on you personally, it's just that that verse isnt good enough to win...either is the one you just dropped against a.r....i'm not trying to act like i'm the almighty or whatever, but that wont beat most dudes that been around for a minute...so dont hitme with that shit because even your boys will vote for me

fuck you!

....

pfft, theres the pms line right there...bitch ass

niggaz call me wack....

Now let me murk my kidz 'sixth sense' till its giving you misdirection
So when you 'see dead people' you wont realise its your own reflection


^that punchline alone killed your whole verse wackness!

wow, s.y.g.u....a 6th sense reference? when people in that movie have made several movies since then, it's time update your punches...like i said, let these people speak for themselves with the votes

da gen not to bad and yes the last line was the best in your whole verse
but lefty does have a more rounded fl;ow and more punches
vote lefty
and bye the way anyone can tell you im not the best
not on anyone side but lefty did put two in your chest /you just got laid to rest
R.I.P. general1!!!!!!!!!!

you win....

nan we can take it to 7, fuck a k-o

why the fuck you gotta be like that 4!

why? you wanna be k-o'd? i'm trying to give you more of a chance

naw its aight,im through

aight fuck it then...good shit...yo, some advice...dont stretch your lines so long, i used to do the same shit...take it or leave it

*takes it*

dudes the general? i'll make your whole army die now/
it's ap"parent" this kid cant even "raise" eyebrows/

^^that and the closer did it for me.

vote: LEFTY