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DAPADON718
beat- One Mic(im also gonna do this on audio soon)

this day ordinarily started out like others
me and Abelo my brother fetchin water for mother
Joku blessed the skies, the proctector of our people
Father kissed our eyes, and told us to beware of the evil
we heard many rumors that swirled around the village
of the pale villans who stole away swarms of children
so we headed to the river juss to fill up our buckets
nothin could ever prepare us for the pain we discovered
smelled a new fragrance could be powder from muskets
but ignored the gut feelin and kept Abelo protected
so we get to riverbank, put water in our liquid tank
stared off a village hut that seemed very quaint
how can such a nice day blessed by Joku feel so errie
even though i shrugged it off many times fear made me weary
as i told my brother about the decendants of Kush
i can hear a ruffled rush from a nearby bush
THEY HAD US SURROUNDED WITH NO WHERE TO RUN
PALE MEN GRABBED US BOTH AND POINTED THEIR GUNS
PUT BAGS OVER OUR HEADS AND BOUND OUR LIMBS
SCREAMED FOR ABELO BUT NO SOUND FROM MY KIN
THEY GRABBED ME UP, BUT I DIDNT KNOW WHERE I WAS GOING
FROM THE VIOLENT BLOW TO MY HEAD NOW THE BLOOD WAS FLOWING
IN AND OUT OF CONSCIOUSNESS, DIDNT KNOW WHAT TO DO
FOUND MY SELF IN A STRAW HOLDIN ROOM WHEN I CAME TOO


Hook- All I need is freedom.4X

So to my suprise saw many of my country men
but to my disdain couldnt find my only kin
what my parents feared has come to fruition
no more stories from papa, and meals from mother's kitchen
when the men came to the room we were still in chains
but my head still throbbed from the dried blood and pain
lead us to the port but couldnt believe my eyes
the biggest ship i ever saw, PLEASE JOKU SAVE ME FROM DEMISE!!
we boarded the ship and the pale men forced us to the bottom
chained together and packed in tight, i knew this was a problem
days passed the voyage began and already there's an unbearable stench
mixed from urine, feces, and the vomit of those young and old who were sick
THEN THE PALE MEN TOOK US TOPSIDE, COULD BE SOME ABOMINABLE GAME
THEY DECIDED THOSE WHO WERE LAME AND MAIMED COULDN'T REMAIN
SO THE WEAK WERE TOSSED FROM THE SHIP THE SIGHT SO HORRIFIC
I SEND MULTIPLE PRAYERS TO JOKU I DOUBT THAT HE HEARS IT!
AND THOSE WHO FOUGHT BACK HEARD THE CRACK OF THE WHIP
WOMEN SLICED WIT BAYONETTS, THEIR BLOOD FILLED BREAST WOULD DRIP
I KNOW IM HEADED FOR DOOM AFTER SEEIN BABIES SLICED FROM THE WOMB
AND TOSSED IN THE WATER SO SOON IN THEIR COCOON AS AN EARTHLY TOMB

Hook- All I Need is Freedom 4x

NOW WE ARRIVE IN THE NEW LAND AND THEY CLEAN US UP
BUT I DONT KNOW THE INTENTIONS BY THE WORDS OF THE STRANGE TOUNGE
WHERE AM I GOING?, SOMEHOW I HOPE TO SEE ABELO
BUT IM IN A LINE WITH MY COUNTRYMEN BEING EXAMINED BY PALE FELLOWS
THEY POINT MY WAY AND FOR ONCE IM UNCHAINED
MORTALY PHASED BUT UNCHANGED AS I BELEIVE HE SHOUTED A NAME
TOOK 40 OF US TO HIS FARM LAND, AND PUT US RIGHT TO WORK
WE CRIED ALL NIGHT TO JOKU WHY DID WE DESERVE THIS CURSE!

Hook- All I Need is Freedom 4x
DAPADON718
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DaGeneral
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Tru Biter From The Dead
oh shit nice drop homey

here's a str8 keystyle i wrote in 11.5 seconds



Artist: Fabolous
Album: Street Dreams
Song: Damn
Typed by: imfabolouswifey@aol.com *

* send corrections to the typist

Unh. It's the duh-duh-duh-duh-duhduhduhduhduhduh-damn

[Intro]
Damn, it the way he grab on himself
before he getting closer to you, girls be like damn
Damn, it's the wife beater
Wish you were the one in the drop top two seater
Damn, I can't blame him
If he wasn't mine shit, I would try to claim him
Cause he's so fly, I'm so fly
You play yourself if you try to deny it, damn

[Verse One]
I'm looking like the other brother
I got no choice but to smut her
Cause I'm in a tan six with a base gut
That look something like a nutta-butta duhduhduhduh (damn)
Mami you'll be in St. Tropez
Riding jet skis and mopeheads, nodding like dopeheads
Paparazzi snapping pictures, they must think you J. Lopez (shwing)
(Damn) Let's roast in spinach, hit a club and just post up in it
What you mean are we here yet?
I got a lear jet that gets to the west coast in minutes (hehe)
(Damn) I'm smoother than white vanilla fudge and white and yellow studs
Cause if they witness how I'm killing them out her
These girls just might go tell the judge I rest my case

[Chorus]
Damn, it the way he grab on himself
before he getting closer to you, girls be like damn (you feelin that right)
Damn, it's the wife beater
Wish you were the one in the drop top two seater (come on let's ride)
Damn, I can't blame him
If he wasn't mine shit, I would try to claim him (I'm sure you would)
Cause he's so fly, I'm so fly
You play yourself if you try to deny it, damn (and what you say girl)

[Verse Two]
You could be prancing through ghetto,
Or indie or a pants and stilettos
All you got to do is swallow some kids
Like that witch did Hansel and Gretle
Who's as handsome as ghetto? (Damn)
This mans earring look transparent
And my Mitchell & Ness throwbacks be so old
they could be somebody grandparents, they be like (Damn)
I want the kind of money athletes consume
I have to assume, I'm no fool but I'm so cool
When I walk in, it feel like it's a draft in the room, Whoo (Damn)
I'm so sick, I drive in reverse pass
Call me a nurse fast
Shorty just lay back in the Maebach
Get a feel like you sitting in first class, relax

[Chorus] w/ ad libs

[Verse Three]
They ask for it
So I put TV's in the headrest and the dashboard
You got to catch it on tape cause when the truck stops
The rims still look like they on fast-forward, unh
(Damn) I'm sipping liquor the color of Smurf's skin
as long as the earth spins, and you'll get seasick
And my waist be thick enough for them Cali dudes to surf in - cowabunga!
(Damn) Your low riding denims look like midgets is hiding in them
They say I like it from the front, they like it from the back
But when the kids is sliding in them, they be screaming (damn)
The biggest dick these switching for dudes for figures like me
And um I'm not bragging
But imagine that you could even fuck with a nigga like me

[Chorus]



fall back homey

UPPIN FO FEED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
scorp414
QUOTE (Tru Biter From The Dead @ Sep 7 2005, 10:57 PM)
oh shit nice drop homey

here's a str8 keystyle i wrote in 11.5 seconds



Artist: Fabolous
Album: Street Dreams
Song: Damn
Typed by: imfabolouswifey@aol.com *

* send corrections to the typist

Unh. It's the duh-duh-duh-duh-duhduhduhduhduhduh-damn

[Intro]
Damn, it the way he grab on himself
before he getting closer to you, girls be like damn
Damn, it's the wife beater
Wish you were the one in the drop top two seater
Damn, I can't blame him
If he wasn't mine shit, I would try to claim him
Cause he's so fly, I'm so fly
You play yourself if you try to deny it, damn

[Verse One]
I'm looking like the other brother
I got no choice but to smut her
Cause I'm in a tan six with a base gut
That look something like a nutta-butta duhduhduhduh (damn)
Mami you'll be in St. Tropez
Riding jet skis and mopeheads, nodding like dopeheads
Paparazzi snapping pictures, they must think you J. Lopez (shwing)
(Damn) Let's roast in spinach, hit a club and just post up in it
What you mean are we here yet?
I got a lear jet that gets to the west coast in minutes (hehe)
(Damn) I'm smoother than white vanilla fudge and white and yellow studs
Cause if they witness how I'm killing them out her
These girls just might go tell the judge I rest my case

[Chorus]
Damn, it the way he grab on himself
before he getting closer to you, girls be like damn (you feelin that right)
Damn, it's the wife beater
Wish you were the one in the drop top two seater (come on let's ride)
Damn, I can't blame him
If he wasn't mine shit, I would try to claim him (I'm sure you would)
Cause he's so fly, I'm so fly
You play yourself if you try to deny it, damn (and what you say girl)

[Verse Two]
You could be prancing through ghetto,
Or indie or a pants and stilettos
All you got to do is swallow some kids
Like that witch did Hansel and Gretle
Who's as handsome as ghetto? (Damn)
This mans earring look transparent
And my Mitchell & Ness throwbacks be so old
they could be somebody grandparents, they be like (Damn)
I want the kind of money athletes consume
I have to assume, I'm no fool but I'm so cool
When I walk in, it feel like it's a draft in the room, Whoo (Damn)
I'm so sick, I drive in reverse pass
Call me a nurse fast
Shorty just lay back in the Maebach
Get a feel like you sitting in first class, relax

[Chorus] w/ ad libs

[Verse Three]
They ask for it
So I put TV's in the headrest and the dashboard
You got to catch it on tape cause when the truck stops
The rims still look like they on fast-forward, unh
(Damn) I'm sipping liquor the color of Smurf's skin
as long as the earth spins, and you'll get seasick
And my waist be thick enough for them Cali dudes to surf in - cowabunga!
(Damn) Your low riding denims look like midgets is hiding in them
They say I like it from the front, they like it from the back
But when the kids is sliding in them, they be screaming (damn)
The biggest dick these switching for dudes for figures like me
And um I'm not bragging
But imagine that you could even fuck with a nigga like me

[Chorus]



fall back homey

UPPIN FO FEED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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DAPADON718
niggaz sleepin on the shit im tryin to show ya'll, this whole shit about the african slave trade..get ya knowledge up kiddies
Jaws
Nigga

fucxk u, u suck dapadon, u fuckin wack fuck fuck u bitchy bitch, richy rich faggot fag
Jaws
fuck afrika

ill take a bite outta that

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DAPADON718
i see ur mad cuz i ate ur sister, dont worry tho, the bitch went smoothly, with some wine and hot sauce
Jaws
QUOTE (DAPADON718 @ Sep 7 2005, 11:57 PM)
i see ur mad cuz i ate ur sister, dont worry tho, the bitch went smoothly, with some wine and hot sauce

letz battle bitch

ThaShizzit
good post dap
DAPADON718
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ATL Undagrind
ok, you did not respond to a biting allegation, so i will have to believe.
DAPADON718
QUOTE (ATL Undagrind @ Sep 8 2005, 01:49 PM)
ok, you did not respond to a biting allegation, so i will have to believe.

my god ur funny, wat biting allegation?...nigga i never bit any time any where on here, so u can fall back wit that foolishness, how imma bite my own self?..i put this shit on HBHH before and now i put it here..fall back wit the bittinshits holmes, the jaws nigga is a multi
ATL Undagrind
QUOTE (DAPADON718 @ Sep 8 2005, 12:50 PM)
wat biting allegation?

most monkeys can infer that if someone pretends to keystyle a known artist's verse in response to yours that its a biting allegation. drive faster homie.
DAPADON718
QUOTE (ATL Undagrind @ Sep 8 2005, 01:53 PM)
QUOTE (DAPADON718 @ Sep 8 2005, 12:50 PM)
wat biting allegation?

most monkeys can infer that if someone pretends to keystyle a known artist's verse in response to yours that its a biting allegation. drive faster homie.

but couldnt u see that this is NOT his thread, so how about instead of payin attention to foolish people, why not juss read wat the thread was intended for?
ATL Undagrind
why would he ever post a bitin allegation in his own thread?
if i did not like foolish people, i would not be on this site.

i read what the thread was intended for and thought it was dope until i was informed it was biten and the biter did not deny it. all im saying is if somebody say you biting you need to defend yourself.
DAPADON718
QUOTE (ATL Undagrind @ Sep 8 2005, 02:02 PM)
why would he ever post a bitin allegation in his own thread?
if i did not like foolish people, i would not be on this site.

i read what the thread was intended for and thought it was dope until i was informed it was biten and the biter did not deny it. all im saying is if somebody say you biting you need to defend yourself.

ok well who ever said i bite is an asshole an u need not listen to them, any one here can vouch for that as well
here is the original thread.
http://s9.invisionfree.com/smack_battle_ce...wtopic=3926&hl=

im still laughin that me of all people is actually defendin biting allegations
Jaws
QUOTE (ATL Undagrind @ Sep 8 2005, 12:49 PM)
ok, you did not respond to a biting allegation, so i will have to believe.

that was tru balla numb nuts

daps lyrics are too wack to bite, he sucks
the one
QUOTE (DAPADON718 @ Sep 7 2005, 11:50 PM)
niggaz sleepin on the shit im tryin to show ya'll, this whole shit about the african slave trade..get ya knowledge up kiddies

Sorry DAP, I skipped over this , but that shit Is deep. I got It the first time. Another hot drop homie, you been fuckin the bored up hard huh?
DAPADON718
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SilvitaLikeWHOA
yoooooooo, no word of a lie DAP, i felt that shit.. the lines where u call out to ABELO but no sound from ya kin and the part about slicin babies out of wombs, the part bout throwin out the sick ones, then paintin a VIVID ass picture about the urine, feces, im touched for reals, that was just beautiful sleep.gif
DAPADON718
QUOTE (SilvitaLikeWHOA @ Sep 9 2005, 01:24 PM)
yoooooooo, no word of a lie DAP, i felt that shit.. the lines where u call out to ABELO but no sound from ya kin and the part about slicin babies out of wombs, the part bout throwin out the sick ones, then paintin a VIVID ass picture about the urine, feces, im touched for reals, that was just beautiful sleep.gif

thank u, i thought about this after i visited a plantation in virginia, and also the blacks in wax museum in b-more, shit juss had me thinkin, also i saw a play at colonial williamsburg that juss made me wanna write this afterwards
nino_brown
that was nice dap... this jaws cat got me fuckin laughin with that pic talkin i'll take a bite outta that... but it was hot
Rascar
myy nigga!...im pleased to read that shit man...deep shit..record it..and keep that shit up..thats what its about
DAPADON718
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OPTICAL
QUOTE (DAPADON718 @ Sep 7 2005, 11:50 PM)
niggaz sleepin on the shit im tryin to show ya'll, this whole shit about the african slave trade..get ya knowledge up kiddies

I felt it...Real hot shit..the storytelling was deep...Keep doing shit like that...its one of my favorite topics
ThaShizzit
oh shit........u deserves GIFts too

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ThaShizzit
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sleeper
good shit dap...felt that shit through n through nig...check out my shit (other side of thy mirror) thread.
DAPADON718
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DAPADON718
wanna make sure the best ones imo are in front..
DAPADON718
i dare the haters to call this one wack
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