1 here comes tha 2 to tha 3 to tha 4//
N.I.C knockin at your fuckin front door//
wit a mutha fuckin 44 in his hand//
you no N.I.C be your man//
an oh
here comes tha 5 to tha 6 to tha 7//
nigga u no i aint gonna make it to heavan//
im gonna go straight though hell//
come back an do thisshit all over again nigga//
wa
here comes tha 5 to tha 4 to tha 3//
you no who this be young N.I.C//
im tha one wit tha tattoo stylin, wyllin, gettin all high an shit on this tipsy remix//
little young N always do it like this//
you no my name, you no who i am//
you no me an u no my fam//
Get Money Entertainment bitch//
this aint tha end so remember this
write how u like this one aight, peace
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Go back to wherever you came from!
see u say that an i juss come on ta piss u off
Well, you must not know me, you cant piss me off, I get a kick out of this!
get ready ta have a kick then cuz playboy i aint goin no where
Thanks!
no prob
| QUOTE (TWEEZE GAMBINO @ Aug 29 2005, 07:01 PM) |
| NED FLANDERS SAID..... http://www.simpsonsguide.com/flanders.gif THAT SHIT WAS WACKADOODELDOOO  |
hey JR. that shit sucked!
white dawg buddy, get u suck dick, so i guess my hood shit an ur white nshit dont go together u hate on me like u hate on 50, cuz ur ass sucks u aint got nothin on g-unit
plus im speakin real shit half tha niggas (an wigggas) spit fake shit
JuniorLF your shits kinda basic blud you need work, plus all da 1 to the 2 to the 3 shit sounds like J-Kwon and you know that aint a good thing
...study the waters before diving in...youve just plunged into an ocean with your swimming pool tactics
rascar get it boy i juss jumpin this shit homie im juss a newbie on this, an for hytola its basic cuz its real. an for everyone hatin on me go a head cuz give me a while cuz im comein up. an for juss startin ta rap thats some good shit homie. so give me time an ill be gettin this shit poppin
hey homie I'm a newbie in the game also....
either way i didnt like your verse. that 1 to the 2 to the 3 bullshit was sooooooo fuckin wack!!!
I dont think I'm a top rapper here...but I know I got the tools to be great!
I havnt battled top peeps in here...but I only lost one battle on this site since I started here.
you just poppin off at the wrong peeps homie....
now shut your mouth startin beef and drop a verse that will WOW everyone...
either way i didnt like your verse. that 1 to the 2 to the 3 bullshit was sooooooo fuckin wack!!!
I dont think I'm a top rapper here...but I know I got the tools to be great!
I havnt battled top peeps in here...but I only lost one battle on this site since I started here.
you just poppin off at the wrong peeps homie....
now shut your mouth startin beef and drop a verse that will WOW everyone...
Yeah I didnt like that verse when J-kwon spit it!
i think i smell a battle
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| QUOTE (JuniorLF @ Aug 29 2005, 06:25 PM) |
| 1 here comes tha 2 to tha 3 to tha 4// N.I.C knockin at your fuckin front door// wit a mutha fuckin 44 in his hand// you no N.I.C be your man// an oh here comes tha 5 to tha 6 to tha 7// nigga u no i aint gonna make it to heavan// im gonna go straight though hell// come back an do thisshit all over again nigga// wa here comes tha 5 to tha 4 to tha 3// you no who this be young N.I.C// im tha one wit tha tattoo stylin, wyllin, gettin all high an shit on this tipsy remix// little young N always do it like this// you no my name, you no who i am// you no me an u no my fam// Get Money Entertainment bitch// this aint tha end so remember this write how u like this one aight, peace |
Alright,try and work on your vocabulary,that's a key thing to rapping you wanna have an advanced vocab or your shit is gonna always sound the same and weak word choice waters down a verse,you can have the greatest concept to write on but if you use elementary rhymes it won't impress,try and use punchlines be clever with them and a good punch always wows somebody,try and use wordplay use shit in the news,recent events,celebs anything just play on it don't use the same words twice either or your wordplay will sound generic,also try and use metaphors it's not a great part of rhyming but it helps make it alot better,and use multi's multi-syllabled rhymes make a verse look alot better cause 1 syllable rhymes are for un-talented ametuers,it's ok to use them but don't use em often.
If you need further explaining just ask.
| QUOTE (JuniorLF @ Aug 29 2005, 07:17 PM) |
| rascar get it boy i juss jumpin this shit homie im juss a newbie on this, an for hytola its basic cuz its real. an for everyone hatin on me go a head cuz give me a while cuz im comein up. an for juss startin ta rap thats some good shit homie. so give me time an ill be gettin this shit poppin |
There's alot to be said for how you act when you come here homey, just be humble, not dissin you but you're obviously pretty new wit this so just be cool about it, not make the mistake that some heads do and kick some simple ass shit and still be like "I'M TAKING THIS SHIT OVER YA HEARD" coz you'll only get clowned. Either have a couple of battles, if you not think you ready for dat yet myself or one of da other lyricists who on here pretty regular (Rascar, Jae, Sets, Jiffo, The One etc) will be glad to sparr wit you and let you sharpen your skills up, just take things one step at a time and people gon respect you and your rhymes gon tighten up.
| QUOTE (Hytola @ Aug 29 2005, 07:47 PM) | ||
There's alot to be said for how you act when you come here homey, just be humble, not dissin you but you're obviously pretty new wit this so just be cool about it, not make the mistake that some heads do and kick some simple ass shit and still be like "I'M TAKING THIS SHIT OVER YA HEARD" coz you'll only get clowned. Either have a couple of battles, if you not think you ready for dat yet myself or one of da other lyricists who on here pretty regular (Rascar, Jae, Sets, Jiffo, The One etc) will be glad to sparr wit you and let you sharpen your skills up, just take things one step at a time and people gon respect you and your rhymes gon tighten up. |
word!
same thing that mc franking just does....and i just ko'ed that fucker 3 votes to nothing!
So relax homie!
If you want to battle me make a thread and drop a verse.....
I'll sparr wit ya....
not going to be around tonight....so drop it and I'll reply tonight or tomorrow....
i think i just threw up in my mouth a lil bit
| QUOTE (Brevan @ Aug 30 2005, 01:05 AM) |
| i think i just threw up in my mouth a lil bit |
| QUOTE (Brevan @ Aug 30 2005, 01:05 AM) |
| i think i just threw up in my mouth a lil bit |
hahahahahaha!!
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