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ladynell
haters can't take me
like lava when it comes 2 da streets
burnin like leaves
so Hot police hit da spot,find rocks
not crack,but diamonds i coped
my wrist stay icey
fellas pass,they body freeze
blow a kiss,they face melt
listen 2 da sound
they askin for help
i'm a female gorilla,i dont care
Ladynell quick 2 pop a hoe
got u niggas spoil,off my oil
askin is it gurshy rihgt thurr,right thurr
sen ya 2 da mall for some black pearls
now da whole world see i'm a hot girl....
i'm a hot girl
i'm a hot girl....

need feedback good and bad...thanks everybody.....
silence
i understand you got a flow and you're in the moment but you must proof read ya shit. you hot or cold from the ice. i know the methaphor ya style is hot, but ya ice is cold but you said


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like lava when it comes 2 da streets
burnin like leaves
so Hot police hit da spot,find rocks
not crack,but diamonds i coped
my wrist stay icey
fellas pass,they body freeze
blow a kiss,they face melt



it doesn't make sense, but overall i was good. peace
ladynell
my style is hot/cold....that's how i'm comin in da game...
like da weather
i can burn ya with my lyrics or freeze ya....
silence
i understand but continue to work on ya flow and wordplay. peace i'm out
ladynell
thanks for da feedback....
Rascar
ur realy DMANS sister?
oooorrrrrrrrrr

when he asked for your numba, u pmed him to pretend that shit to bugg niggas out...lol
White Dawg
that was aight....

some shit I didnt even understand nor did it make sense. But nice work there lady!
ladynell
he has my new cell # cause i changed my #
but that's my brother...he out of town and i'm in n.o.
so sometimes we talk on here cause nextel is high...
ladynell
thanks white dwag...i'm tryin...
Rascar
QUOTE (ladynell @ Aug 23 2005, 12:38 PM)
he has my new cell # cause i changed my #
but that's my brother...he out of town and i'm in n.o.
so sometimes we talk on here cause nextel is high...

OHHHH...n he ur lil bro..so u watchin out fa him, lol...jkin..i c now
romero
yea u got a nice flow
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not crack,but diamonds i coped
N i wuz feelin dat line but to step ya game up, all u need is a couple new words to thro a curve at da reader or listener to keep em interested. but i dont believe u gotta hav hella multis and syllables like everybody else say, cuz if u reely wanna make it outside of textin and in REAL world its not needed. long as its HOT and sounds good u straight
ladynell
thanks Romero...love da feedback...i guest i'm gettin better...Ras u is funny with yo crazy self....thanks...again...
Rascar
raunchy rhyme stillllll...Silence say he know about my skill?...my man dnt kno about skill period...lick-a-dick and dont you ever PM me again....hows illerspits? i had one ebattle and im like in the top 10...whats that all about??? n e ways SI, umma letcha get on with.......

.....grown mens stuff i guess...lol, fuck outta here kid

sexy shit lady
the one
QUOTE (ladynell @ Aug 23 2005, 12:29 PM)
my style is hot/cold....that's how i'm comin in da game...
like da weather
i can burn ya with my lyrics or freeze ya....

I wanna read some of your written rhymes! Is that possible since you said your not a freestyler????? Maybe that'll change my perception of you as a rapper!
Baby Jeezy
bitch you done brought me back, wit cho wack ass raps
cause when i hit your head, you hear crackles pops and snaps(yeaaahhh!)
dude you cannot rhyme, you running outta time
everytime he hear you voice, the baby start to cryin(jeah!)
you freakin suck cunt, or should i say punk
only thing hot come out your mouth, is regurgitated spunk (dayyuumm!)
i know you got milk, you freakin load drinker
they busted yo ass so hard, shit and the camode's pinker(what!)
boy you need to stop, untuck your freakin cock
nose too big for powder, you must be snortin rocks(dayyuumm!)
hate my success dont you, i just went freakin gold
its not a cold day, why your tongue stuck to a pole (that's righhhtt!)
this aint a christmas story, more like a dis em story
i need some new draws, why dont you get some for me (uuhhhnnn!)

Jae Stylez
Rapping is not for you,you could'nt get a deal if you sucked off every A&R from here to Cali,please give it up mellow.gif
White Dawg
QUOTE (Baby Jeezy @ Aug 23 2005, 02:17 PM)
bitch you done brought me back, wit cho wack ass raps
cause when i hit your head, you hear crackles pops and snaps(yeaaahhh!)
dude you cannot rhyme, you running outta time
everytime he hear you voice, the baby start to cryin(jeah!)
you freakin suck cunt, or should i say punk
only thing hot come out your mouth, is regurgitated spunk (dayyuumm!)
i know you got milk, you freakin load drinker
they busted yo ass so hard, shit and the camode's pinker(what!)
boy you need to stop, untuck your freakin cock
nose too big for powder, you must be snortin rocks(dayyuumm!)
hate my success dont you, i just went freakin gold
its not a cold day, why your tongue stuck to a pole (that's righhhtt!)
this aint a christmas story, more like a dis em story
i need some new draws, why dont you get some for me (uuhhhnnn!)

hahahahahahahaha!!!!!

Why dont you take somemore of young Jeezy's lyrics....

you wack homie. Stop tryin to rip off someone else's style thats already in the rap game and do your own shit.

I speak the truth homie. Next time I log in please have a better flow.....
ATL Undagrind
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Trevor Sheenan, is this really your mom?
Tell that bitch to cheer up, scrub some of that smut off her face,
and go to Super Cuts to get her goatee a shape up.

She's really looking rough about the face and neck.
ladynell
jae u out of ya mind...man i already have a deal stupid...i'm a great writer....stop hatin.....
Jae Stylez
QUOTE (ladynell @ Aug 23 2005, 03:24 PM)
jae u out of ya mind...man i already have a deal stupid...i'm a great writer....stop hatin.....

Lies compound lies,your not DMAN's sister,your not good looking,your not a great writer cause you suck ass at anything you write,you can't even make coherent sentences for me to read how the fuck you gonna write a song,you don't have a deal you never will,you have to have a thing called "talent" it's something you lack.
ladynell
man u crazy...i'm very cute...i'm a great writer...and stop hatin....u can't flow 2 we'll ya-self....
mr jiffo
LMAO@ all this laugh.gif laugh.gif

i love it.......

yo ATL, these guys shud battle snap??
ATL Undagrind
QUOTE (ladynell @ Aug 23 2005, 03:31 PM)
i'm very cute...i'm a great writer

HA

Nigga, I hope you break your hip.

Just offering you some motivation.
Jae Stylez
QUOTE (ladynell @ Aug 23 2005, 03:31 PM)
man u crazy...i'm very cute...i'm a great writer...and stop hatin....u can't flow 2 we'll ya-self....

laugh.gif laugh.gif laugh.gif Don't make me pull out those multiple PM's saying how great you thought I was,I can flow,my flow>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>you whole existence and no your not cute I would tell if you were,when you do put up a pic it's 100% guranteed stolen,and notice how she did'nt defend that she ACTUALLY was DMAN's sister.
ATL Undagrind
QUOTE (Jae Stylez @ Aug 23 2005, 03:36 PM)
no your not cute I would tell if you were,when you do put up a pic

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Jae Stylez
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ladynell problems, Aug 18 2005, 11:49 PM › quote




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i gave u yo props!!!! so y r u hatin on me!!!!! u got mad flow!!!! so lrean 2 b humble with it!!!!not so disrespectful 2 others man!!!!!there's always somebody better than u!!! but good luck with yo career!!!! u got what it takes!!!!!GOD BLESS U 2B MORE HUMBLE MAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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ladynell realshit, Aug 19 2005, 12:13 AM › quote




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thanks for da support!!!!! I'm gonna start callin u hotspitta!!!! cause u on fire man..... keep doin ya thang!!!!!!!what is yo contact so i can call ya!!!!


Jae Stylez
QUOTE (ATL Undagrind @ Aug 23 2005, 03:39 PM)
QUOTE (Jae Stylez @ Aug 23 2005, 03:36 PM)
no your not cute I would tell if you were,when you do put up a pic

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laugh.gif laugh.gif laugh.gif laugh.gif
mr jiffo
LMFAOOOOoooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

oh shit



PLEASE take that pic down mad.gif ph34r.gif
ladynell
ATL u is crazy...but funny... biggrin.gif laugh.gif biggrin.gif
Jae u got flow...but u is a true hater...
so
i stay away from wangsta's like u ...
it make me sick....
the one
What label you gatta deal with Lady???
ladynell
some people on here r real artist...but u never know...cause they don't post their
real name..but i got a local deal in n.o.i'm doing well down here...so it's cool
what people on here think of me...
White Dawg
You got a deal???? hahahaha!
Hey good luck, but if I was you I'd work more on my skills then trying to pick up guys on the double X L website.
I think you do got a flow, but you should be MUCH better if you got a deal...
ladynell
thanks..but i'm married...i don't want no man on here....i'm well taken care of...
thanks for da feedback...
and really far from ugly....all jokes 2 da side....
White Dawg
Ok if you say so....

I'm out ya'll peeps....

East side HOLLA!!
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