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IrOn MaN
As minds turn and eyes burn//
in this world of ignorance I keep my mind open a binder//
wake up at night with visions of livin in prison//
usung my sharp rhymes as metphorical weapons//
leavin buried 6 feet deep under the resin//
forgotten the rotten presence of holy figures//
as I sin sweatin bullets and sufferin cold shivers//
as I repeat folicles of these murderous raps//
life is like a gun,run from it and get splurted in the back//
foes will not test this till their left breathless in Texas//
i'm recklewss with the pen till my paper bleeds//
stickin up criminals and leavin rapers at they knees//
I leave these verse to rest,with a emotianal barrier as a vest//
uncomparable treason,leavin pharoahs shook at uncomprable alligience//
criminals bruised with charitable beatings//
as I leave readers in awe at this numerical thesis//
Setsotama
its ok



but your spellin' is a lil off
IrOn MaN
QUOTE (Setsotama @ Aug 22 2005, 11:45 PM)
its ok



but your spellin' is a lil off

Yeah I noticed,thanks for the feed.Any tips or pointers?
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