PROLIFICS VERSE
If you hear I’m on a track you better run for real, you lose with those nonsense skills/
My punches ill, I missed the Godfather but I hear the best parts when the Don gets killed/
I make defeat nice for you so I give it you with a pedicure, toe-tag when I dead this dork/
Veto don’t even like this forum, he got more post on FK than his own message board/*
Be real we want Veto to scram, guess you want everyone to see ya the man, don’t you/
But really you just a small name, and Veto wouldn’t be big as Viva La Bam’s uncle/**
Ppl asked if it’d be a tight duel, against Veto I said “yea he nice too”, I tell so many lies/
The truth fag is ya punches should come wit a blue bag they been recycled so many times/
I’m the best and the rest just hating, the text just stating they know I’m next and the rest just waiting/
Putting Ohio on the map? don’t mean to be gritty but the last group to blow from ya city didn’t live up to expectation/***
Putting him down like bedtime, be real if Veto headlined who’d be there to support it/
Dare I report it, the last time Veto ripped the mic he ruined his new pair of Air Jordans/
I’m not stunting ya reputation cause that’s nothing to try to scare me/
Yea Veto can be the next MC if he learn to hit high notes like Mariah Carey/
Don’t be offended by this, I’m just plain nice and that shit you dropped you was just playing right?/
I’d feel a little ashamed cause Don Veto Ali future had to start and end on the same site/****
I don't like to do this but some of these u may not know or have paid attention to...
* on the fatty koo message board veto has like 1500+ post and only 700+ here on AF
** if you watch Viva La Bam you know his uncle Vito is about 400 pounds, big as hell lol
*** fatty koo is from toledo Ohio too, veto's hometown. remember "blowin up fatty koo", well album sales say differently i hear
**** when you log into AF it says "welcome to AF, your future starts here..."
Full Version: Prolific Vs. Veto (battle From Af)
VETO'S VERSE
Blessed with the lyrical gift I eat emcees like cannabliest/
You’re the type to say “countless” rhymes that don’t “add up” to shit/
Catch a smack to the face “positively” why be “negative for”/
Veto’s a 5 mic emcee but your rating score is just a “negative four”/
I’m the teacher you’re the student and guess what I’m here to test you/
Your rhymes could be “educated” and they still wouldn’t be “special”/
You’re a pathetic nigga I’d diss you and physically beat you to death/
Your flows racked your broke as couldn’t “afford to cash” my “mic check”/
You claim to be “a bad man”// besides that fact your rhymes sink like holes in a raft
And plus you dick ride so get of my “ball shaft” damn//*
You tried to have a “breakthrough” with those wack rhyme hooks/
How bout I “break through” your face with left jabs and right hooks/
Nigga I’m wise while your dumb knowledge your brain lacks some/
Late time you had “wisdom” is when the “tooth” broke though your gums/
So use as many stolen styles and flows as your weak ass yarn too/
But my words are like “natzi” soldiers because each one has “burned you”/ **(Jew)
*I said he is a dick rider so get off my “ball shaft” which is part of the male organ (lol I feel like a teacher) but I also said he is “a bad man” which is what they called “shaft”
** its pretty much self explained but when you say “burned you” it sound like “burned Jew” which is what happened in the holocaust or however you say it. Lol (my bad if anyone took offense to that line.)
Blessed with the lyrical gift I eat emcees like cannabliest/
You’re the type to say “countless” rhymes that don’t “add up” to shit/
Catch a smack to the face “positively” why be “negative for”/
Veto’s a 5 mic emcee but your rating score is just a “negative four”/
I’m the teacher you’re the student and guess what I’m here to test you/
Your rhymes could be “educated” and they still wouldn’t be “special”/
You’re a pathetic nigga I’d diss you and physically beat you to death/
Your flows racked your broke as couldn’t “afford to cash” my “mic check”/
You claim to be “a bad man”// besides that fact your rhymes sink like holes in a raft
And plus you dick ride so get of my “ball shaft” damn//*
You tried to have a “breakthrough” with those wack rhyme hooks/
How bout I “break through” your face with left jabs and right hooks/
Nigga I’m wise while your dumb knowledge your brain lacks some/
Late time you had “wisdom” is when the “tooth” broke though your gums/
So use as many stolen styles and flows as your weak ass yarn too/
But my words are like “natzi” soldiers because each one has “burned you”/ **(Jew)
*I said he is a dick rider so get off my “ball shaft” which is part of the male organ (lol I feel like a teacher) but I also said he is “a bad man” which is what they called “shaft”
** its pretty much self explained but when you say “burned you” it sound like “burned Jew” which is what happened in the holocaust or however you say it. Lol (my bad if anyone took offense to that line.)
pro was solid, but had stretched bars, this really upset the flow....also, some of the punches were lacking.....veto had some good worplay in a few of the punches.....
vote = v by a nose hair
vote = v by a nose hair
ok veto seems as if ur tryin to elevate, ur usin more witty concepts, but still some of it is forced like this whole section was blah
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| Blessed with the lyrical gift I eat emcees like cannabliest/ You’re the type to say “countless” rhymes that don’t “add up” to shit/ Catch a smack to the face “positively” why be “negative for”/ Veto’s a 5 mic emcee but your rating score is just a “negative four”/ |
^^for the love of god veto quit that harlem dipset style of rhyming, its horrible and juss plain stupid at times, i see wat u were tryin to accomplish but it's a no no, only if u hell rell or sumthin id be tolerable..lol, but u are gettin a little more witty my charcoled colored friend i liked this line
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| Your flows racked your broke as couldn’t “afford to cash” my “mic check”/ |
^^that was witty as fuck, but overall for someone who brags like u do, i wanna see more elevation, make me bang the keyboard in my head cuz the shit is juss that good and undeniable, when that day comes the jokes on u will stop Sambo
Those are the same verses, WTF you battlin yourself under different names with the same rhyme, WOW! Nah, just fuckin with ya, get ya postn' skills together nigga!
lol my fault man my computer didn't copy the verse for some reason. lol i fixed it and put pros verse up again.
lol dap how you gone call me chorcoal nigga? lol....but thanks for the feed back.
Vote: Veto
Niether had that "Whoa" effect!
But I liked Veto's wordplay, vocab, and punches!
Niether had that "Whoa" effect!
But I liked Veto's wordplay, vocab, and punches!
Both were not totally great with the punchlines.
But I'll have to give it to Veto.
vote: Veto
But I'll have to give it to Veto.
vote: Veto
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