streets disciple, once i finish with u
u gon need a bible
it's LADYNELL a hot spitta
u dont want none of da female gorilla
keep playin,and watch how i get ya.
2 blades in my hand,and watch how i split ya
war with me is worse then bin laden coming back on xmas
don't battle me,i'll plant u da seed
i aint talkin bout a baby,talkin bout makin ya head red gravy
u da only pussy on this site that HATE me
so i gotta throw u up like sour red beans
on my stomach,u aint nothing,but a web dummie
so i'm gonna pimp u up,and make u become my gay friend honey
ooh,ooh tell everyboby on da web his balls is yummie
now ya job is lickin ball 2 get money
and pay me for tryin 2 front on me
can't freestyle,but i just dis u homie

fuck streets disciple,KEEP FUCKIN HATIN ON ME...BICTH ASS FAGOT!!!!!

LoL

You want me to respond to this?

You REALLY want me to respond to this?

I'll script up 4 lines and murk this whole verse

Just give me the word you koala humper


Love,

You're soon to be happy father

yo lady nell that shit was nuttin but hot fiyah, u got that nigga for sure!!!!!!!!!!!!

You can see the God? Na bitch, replace ya eyes
u could have DAP sittin on ya verse..still couldn't outweigh my rhymes
say you got a record deal? Bitch u fakin with ya rants
I'll beat this pussy so bad, it'll turn this lady to a tramp
Dissin the God? smack the blashphemy out this clowns mouth
And sex to her is like her region..she always goin down south
fuckin ho, fronting like you a lady..this bitch is just fakin
cuz she got so many sons on her face, she'll start her own civilization


vote this up

thanks,DAPADON718.....I'm learnin how 2 freestyle...so i'm ready for whatever he bring at me....it's bout time for me and him 2 go 2 war...sence I'm so WACK!!!!he gotta prove it!!!!! haaaaaa.........

its a metaphor, Vita

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Streets disciple

vote this up faggo's

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Calles(means streets in spanish ledy ho)

Vote: Streets

ladynell
i can tell
that you smell
not that well

silvitalikeWHoa
silvitolikeNOOOO
your a hoe
get my dough
OOOOOHHHH

SETSO
lets go
il kill you with my big toe
my names joe

streets verse bien sur, but ladynell said she cuddn freestyle n e ways..hn her verse was better than a lot of peoples...(im giving NO names)..ladynells shud do her thing..but sd did daughter u...but n e ways...u kno wat they say...poets n all...

yeah,i like yo verse thanks for supportin me,cause i'm haven fun lreanin how 2 freestyle...u killed me in a small verse teach me how 2 do that.....

have punches multis, and good metaphors and catchy phrases\


thats all thats there to teach really, ladynell

thanks

overall....




not much to say....

Yeah of course SD had this one. But Ladynell remember text is harder than regular audio. Listen to critiques on the text categories. Peep examples to learn and you'll be okay. Yeah before textin I rapped and shit. But I didn't know what the hell was a metaphor, wordplay, multiz, and shit like that. I had them in raps yeah but I didn't no what one meant. And soome of that shit I had to watch and learn to see how to do one. I seen cats start text like saying

I'm gangsta~dog you a wanksta~ya'll, I stack paper~n~ball
And other wierd shit they thought was cool. Now they rippin shit.

Mimi I'm sure a lot of heads on here can help you if you ask. If they won't pm me a drop of some of ya best shit. We'll go from that aight. I don't mind helping with whatever. I might learn somethin from you neva know. 1

I'll help anyone out........

im so hurt to find out...............ya'll dont know what a metaphor is....

thanks for da comments...some people start off weak 2 get strong...
so call me what u wanna...i'm learnin something new...so it's cool!!

Wordplay=play with the words like your more 'shook' than maracas,incorparate words that could be used to decribe the word or sumthin the word does.

Metaphors=comparisons like you a star i'ma galaxy

Multi's=multi syllabyled rhymes like how people at the end of the line have like 3 or more words then the next line they have 3 word to follow up[ the rhyme.

Punchlines=Your ending a line with sumthin,you gotta think of somethin clever or funny or the line would'nt hit,hence a punchline.

Vocab=the ctalouge of words you use

thanks for da advice Jae....I learn more stuff everyday....thanks again...
my next battle should be better...

^^No Jae no

Please don't ever try to explain categories in your life, until you get nice or something


Metaphor-Comparing two objects without the words like, as, or than

Example- "I'll beat this pussy so bad, it'll turn this lady to a tramp"


Simile-Comparing two objects using the words like, as or than

Example-"I'm dope like cocaine"


Wordplay-A play on words, using pun's and what not to make a line more clever or witty

Example-"Then put ‘tu-mor’ in ya brain, like im givin u cancer"


Multi-syllable Rhyme- In short it's called a multi, A rhyme that consist's of more than one syllable rhyming.

Example- "Jae Stylez is 14 and he sucks at rap
Dude talk's like a G but can't bust a gat"

The highlighted parts are multi's



Internal Rhyming-Rhyming more than once WITHIN a line

"I'll put you [/B] in frigid kitchens and kittens will be switchen
Niggas is flippin, cuz im livin and sippin the civic"

The highlighted part's are internal rhymes



There's your free rap lesson. Now don't be wack no more and practice.

Calles, that Tumor line captured you man

Haha

Na I aint the wordplay I used to be, so when I saw that line I was impressed

@ SD, YOU MAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

thanks SD i'm workin on it at home now....

im attached to weaponary..i love them mechanicals
but i dnt play too ruff, we can be kool and amical
lugers and calicholes(spelling?)sharp shooters for any old
maricon talkin to my crew and havin no
respect, i get my rep by whats set on tape decks
make any attempt to dampen my name, i take steps
and measures, wave techs for pleasure, i step to apexes
ur archaic flows dont match, so go back to day lessons
track lacer, rap slayer and back breaker
i take action right away, when done, dont stay to chat, later!
only difference between me and you if not gayness
is i sip cocktails whiles you lick up cock tails
on ur internet dot page..it says youve got mail
not mail, but males, the spunk sprays
sell ur assests..boracic, i dont care for your junk sales
conduct drug sales, tell a regular bronx tale

separate from this rap, maybe relax, and smoke blunts
trust no one, that in mind i tote guns
u dont wanna be around rascar when ur doe comes
ill turn evil n spark, leave u in the park with the broke bums

i was bored..a lil freestyle....keepin up appearances

I never worry bout a hater.....I wanna battle Jae Monday,8/22/05
2 test my skills.....thanks for da comments good and bad.....i'm still happy!!!

RAS that was hot.... keep doin yo thing man....

k


ladynell, i'll wish you luck, and kick ass

thanks,SETS i'm gonna try....soon i'm b on top of this freestyle shit in a minute....

yo ladynell

what was up with you acting all stupid yesterday? with all the caps and shit

just havin fun....but i really b chillin....i got a show 2nite here in da N.O.on canel street....so i'll b on here till later.... everybody was talkin bout me, i made'em talk more...but i was havin fun...

yo lady...stil aint seen a pic of ya...wat u luk like so i can look out for ya

i don't put pic's on da web,cause of rumors that don't b true...but i'm very beautiful....i know alot of people say they cute on da web...but look a mess...so 1 day u will see me...or give me yo contact so i can get yo address i'll mail you 1...

wat email? cuz my email address JOPASCBA@AOL.COM thats my AIM too...im curious ta c wat u look like, thats all...