5 votes to win
200 posts to vote UNLESS YOUR IN THE TOURNEY

due Thursday August 18th, NO EXCEPTIONS, (vets know i keep movin, i dont wait for procrastinators)

No multi user votes, I WILL get tha true meaning to check IP's so no ones getting away with that cornball shit

16 lines MAX, u can drop lower, but thats on you.

no biting-automatic DQ


Sign in both of you, if neither drops a verse, the person who signs in will move on.

FEEL FREE TO PM ME THE VERSES IF YOU DONT WANT YOUR OPPONENT SEEING YOUR SCRIPT, YOU CAN PM ME HERE OR AT HOODBRED. YOUR CHOICE.

Da rude boi is here to steel dem taco's


In

I'm in.

Bump for battle

Ay Streets.....I pm'd you my verse.

yo jae u plan on dropping by tonight??

bump for battle

Jea.....Drop yours, then he'll drop mine.

I know you ain't gon no show.

shit i'ma drop first take ya time rook
you could'nt 'punch' a 'line' if you fought ya rhymebook
muthafucka all that wack gun talk ain't ain't raw
cause you have'nt popped shit since that pussy in '84
writin them slow raps you will get ya dome cracked
then get ho slapped cause we all know that you ain't wrote that
talk shit you will get beat with a hefty impala
i'll break your shoulder blades and point them up like Kanye West's collar
bring the dick riders I know all the cowards that follow
when you get ya throat slit with one you'll know the power of a dollar
you said that "king of the silence tourney" shit and looked stupid for days
I should punch in the right side of ya skull so ya head droop like a beret*
when you in the hospital i'll put ya nurses in locked hearses
tear ya to bits,use the remains to wipe nuts from Jae's cock that you worship
you could read my rhymes and can't get 'style' ya net-rep's bile
shut ya mouth before I put the gauge to ya face and make you my red-headed step-child


Blah quick keystyle

*beret (ba-ray) are hats that soldiers wear,they falll to the right side*

my bad yall i was gone for a minute

dmans verse


I see you SLEEPIN' on me I'm gon' SEE YOU TO BED//
But INSTEAD of countin' sheep you countin G-UNIT THREADS//
It's HE WHO HAD SAID "Im a Bitch". I SEEN IT AND READ//
Then called you out. I'm still standin' on the SCENE DAT U FLED//
This dude think he HARD, He SOFTER then 112//
You must be TRYIN' TO GET RIPPED, like you been liftin' DUMBELLS//
By the way....Whats this about VETS DON'T LIKE ME?//
They like you cause you a BITCH (vet/dog) JUST DON'T BITE THESE//(lyrics)
I see you love DIPSET......I ain't NO HOMO//
Bone Collecta got ya PHOTO in eye candy, You's a BROKE FRODO//
And you claim you Gangsta? Ya'll this FAKERS BLUFFIN//
I'll COOK ya flow. Pick ya fate, firePLACE or OVEN//
But you soft, so it kinda feels like I'm BAKIN' MUFFINS//
You a vantriliquist dummy, runnin ya mouth but ain't SAYIN NUFFIN//
You can't even be honest bout ya age. How many lies will dis BITCH TELL?//
His Avatar fits this KID WELL cause you just caught a BIG L//

flow-dman
multis-dman
wordplay-dman
personals-dman
punches-dman

Jae, cut down on the length of your lines man, wow them shit's are big and useless. I also feel alot of your punches are badly worded, or forced. Some of them are down right corny, especially the kanye/collar one. But keep at it. Dman had a more solid verse overall.

vote-dman

VOTE: DMAN

dman got this....more solid overall

vote = d

damn, dman.. tight verse! most lines was good... the ones that wasnt good, was WOW! heres what i liked best...

closer was ill...took it wit that. nice performances by both, but vote goes to

vote:dman

I see you SLEEPIN' on me I'm gon' SEE YOU TO BED//
But INSTEAD of countin' sheep you countin G-UNIT THREADS//
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haha that made me laugh cuz its so true...

It's cool DMAN won,i'll just have to come harder next time,I was tryin to write to meet my worst enemy "a deadline" so I said fuck it and keystyled that in 5 minutes,not swayin just sayin

yo dman got this imo....but i must give credit to jae i thought he was just a shit talkin' herb but duke got some skill....

"you said that "king of the silence tourney" shit and looked stupid for days
I should punch in the right side of ya skull so ya head droop like a beret*"

^^^^^^^that was hot!

all dmans shit was on point......

Yo...Jae nice drop son.....Keep that shyt up.

that battle was hot...but my brother d-man killed it...job we'll done....

dammy brother jay took it in the chin but i know you got heart but dman riped it out your chest like Murderous Morpheus did me

bye the way m.m. when your done winning the title me and you have to go at it just for my own shit because you fuck me up i got to be more on point so if i post some thing for you and you think its worth for you to spit at me than i whould bee honered