I'm the miracle
warlike militarants when I get theorical
flip to a mode thats lyrical
paint a composition
dismantel with a pin point inscisson
break it down like nucuelar fission
with precission
exceptional harmony like in the Army
I'm always armed see
mentally and verbally
homicidal thoughts
get bought
in so many diffrent procedures
trisect you with a cleaver
then damn you like a beaver
extend you from a J
to an L
humiliating shameful
when OPTIC starts to yell
meaningless pretending
recognize few when attending
my ways of giving
cause my record rates ascending
cd's rotating
mega mating
attempted stimulation
as cold as refrigeration
loving sexual sensations
most beautifullest
in trans-compulation
identity of my constructed anatamoy
be all you can be
entry and exit
reverse themselve
benz for the welth
clock jewelz
faster than a stealth bomb
ironiclly you calm
p-killing to your momz
all you can do is sob
by law
you have proved to be an unqualified clown
leave my town
disabling, stabling, then enabling
take your thangs and on to the gods you go
because you were just to slow
on the sabbath you bet not lust
XXL make me sensor my words so I do not cuss
I'm out this peiece now that I finished this verse

U should condense ya lines.....n it flows badly....try not 2 concentrate on makin everything rhyme...n structure ya bars betta


I'm the miracle
warlike militarants when I get therocal<<<(this is not ah word)
flip to a mode thats lyrical
paint a composition
dismantel with a pin point inscisson
break it down like nucuelar fission
with precission
exceptional harmony like in the Army


^^^Makes no sense....its like ya talkin out tha side if ya neck.....step up ya game



Crucifixio 4 Pres

theory treracal is a word I just did not spell it right

Do you mean theoretical?

right I did not have my dictionary...I appreciate that

well...it was ok....better than some cats here....but the flow was ehh...and for all the big words you had, it barely made a but of sense....

beautifullest < not a word...not even slang...
trans-compulation < not a word
bever < this is a short drnking break within a meal? wtf

you need to think of what you want to say, then say it...you seem to just be throwing words about for the sake or "lyricism"....

keep at it....

beautifulist you must never heard of keith murray...and i meant beaver damned like a beaver

anything else I always make since look deep

and i wish i could spit it for you the flow is on point it keeps going non stop
no pause...so it flows fine

trans meaning transportation right, compulation meaning a collab of emcees....basically i am on every coast collabing

and its not deep as like story like but it tells me as an emcee if you look close its how I rip, how I rip u, and what i wan to do and how I want to progress from this, all condensed in to this little rhyme...written in 5 mins like all mine are

no compulation is what i meant a album where i travel putting everyone on board, I would not just put a word in there for nothing

okay I can do that, but I just wish people would post so I could give opinions..ya know...I have been on here not to long and you would think people would post at least one freestyle a day...I just put the stuff up that I don't care if you take...lets get some verses you regulars

sometime in 2002..
rebels thought it best to go and round up a crew..
and fight the president...chased him got him locked down, just shootin
town polluted..child lose his parents..so many fights its confusin
we thought we found the solution..we all locked down in delusion..
dnt even know how we assumed..we could make it better to live..
in a cloud round, long and blue..chose to withhold insteada just givin..
rebels ready for prison..ready for death..ready to give their lives for respect..
for their god and people, as long as in return theyre blessed..
im talkin bout the Gulf of Guinea..all these self oppiniated..
hombres..can tuck in their tails and go away..to hell..cuz, they just hatin' on it
innoccent stowaways..crossing the medeterraneen..
claimin asyulum, dying..confined to neva see the day again...
the legacy is flagrant...nations just wont abandon..
they cant..so they take the battle to the camps and
military bases..
chased..expatriated round the diastra..
and i ask why..as i, look to the sky for an answer...


sumn quick

i like how you just post off the head...real emceeing thats what I am talking about