Now, look who's back in the studio
Rough like sand paper but cooler than Coolio
Attitude of a gangsta: don't give a fuck
Got the strut of a hustler tryinna make a fast buck
I'm still into the same thang, down with the same gang
It's in my heart, other catz do it to gain fame
But not me
See I don’t say I’m the top of double X L son
Just cuz of your name it don’t mean you’re the one
See I'ma ridin' till I'm Restin
In Peace, that I'm packin' my Smith & Wesson
It's the young rebel
Born and raised to live in the ghetto
Catz like mc frank hide at their momma’s place
Homies know he a fake thug and a fuckin disgrace
On some other shit
White Dawg out on another level
Burgundy flaggin', pants saggin' on the 'Shaw
Blastin' on motherfuckers, disobeyin' the law
But we don't give a fuck, we break rules, takes fools
Disrespectin' homies in the - Avenue Piru
Just lost me
And cost me a grip
They wonder I trip went and flip the whole script
Bitch SACKING don’t know the game cuz he a fake ass thug
If he ever came around my hood his head would take a slug
Bloods & Crips bangin' heads
Claimin' blue or red, pullin' eighty-five percent
Sittin' in the Feds
I shed enough tears in my youth time
Saw cops killed street soldiers in the truce time
Bangin' is a fad, it's a fad but it's a culture
My bedroom gettin' circled by some mother fuckin vultures
Ultra-sound bouncin' back, now we having twins
But where the fuck I'ma gettin my ends?

let me know what you guys think...

Nice, liked ya rhyme but a lil inconsistant, your multis get rapid and calm down, but wit da right beat that would sound crazy on audio

You=nice

thanks...

i dont understand why people give good feedback for some weak spits and bad feedback for others...i didnt like it...maybe im just a hater...

why you hate on me homie? Seems like others thought my flow was tight....

you lookin for feedback or fishin for compliments? im not hatin man i just didnt like it thats all...it was bla bla...just whatever to me...thats all

read my BLOW IN THE WIND rhymes...i keystyled some rhymes there...im trying to see something...so if yall could go there and give some honest feedback...im comming with a next verse tomorrow...had enuff rhymin for today...on and off the net...White Dawg, im readin your shit now

pretty decent..good shit...i see you took a pop at Uno...lol and MC Frank, who by the way i dont know why yall diss because he stated he was no MC..good shit still and deep because you got xtra personnal towards the end