I wanna try this battle thing for tha first time, anybody wanna go against me? im a rookie so im rusty as hell
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ok, I see, then I'll give you a lyrical exercise then instead of a battle, and it goes like this
you make a verse
I make a verse,
if you wanna diss me, then go ahead, but this is all for fun and good training that'll build you up
and etc
hows that?
you make a verse
I make a verse,
if you wanna diss me, then go ahead, but this is all for fun and good training that'll build you up
and etc
hows that?
thats cool dawg, but lets battle or somethin just so i can see how i do, u can straight up demolish me dont go easy on me just cuz its my first time aight. then if u want, u can still help me out wit yo idea, straight?
alright, we'll battle, afterwards, I'll help you out a lil, like I help canttouchthis
aight cool homie, we freestlyin and sayin whatever right?
its whatever, you're choice
aight, well lemme think of some shit to say lol, u want me to go first or what homie?
I think this kid is pool sharkin you SETS! HAHAHA 
| QUOTE (the one @ Aug 10 2005, 01:19 PM) |
| I think this kid is pool sharkin you SETS! HAHAHA |
what u mean man?
well since you called out, traditionally, you have to go first, so post
I'll battle an1 n this thread right now....if ya game 
aight sets check me out mayne...
I'm big pimpin like that nigga Jay-z/
I also got a bad bitch who's name begins with tha letter B/
I'm a workin man tryna get my college degree/
so I aint a thug or a gangsta as you can see/
but i got a mouth full of gold teeth and i carry heat if you carry beef/
so listen and be easy and keep ya distance from me/
cuz you'll be wrapped in hospital sheets in a deep sleep countin sheep/
now you may think my rhymes and flow is weak/
so if i get out voted i know how to take a defeat/
I'll just take as if I'm underrated like Eightball and MJG/
but at this moment if I was you I would retire like Rodney Peete/
i came to run over you in this battle like a jeep cherokee/
and if you stay in my way i'll just swith to reverse and proceed to repeat/
I'm playin this game for keeps/
so bring what you got or just take a seat/
I'm outta words now so my freestyle is complete/
I'm big pimpin like that nigga Jay-z/
I also got a bad bitch who's name begins with tha letter B/
I'm a workin man tryna get my college degree/
so I aint a thug or a gangsta as you can see/
but i got a mouth full of gold teeth and i carry heat if you carry beef/
so listen and be easy and keep ya distance from me/
cuz you'll be wrapped in hospital sheets in a deep sleep countin sheep/
now you may think my rhymes and flow is weak/
so if i get out voted i know how to take a defeat/
I'll just take as if I'm underrated like Eightball and MJG/
but at this moment if I was you I would retire like Rodney Peete/
i came to run over you in this battle like a jeep cherokee/
and if you stay in my way i'll just swith to reverse and proceed to repeat/
I'm playin this game for keeps/
so bring what you got or just take a seat/
I'm outta words now so my freestyle is complete/
| QUOTE (crucifixio @ Aug 10 2005, 02:02 PM) |
| I'll battle an1 n this thread right now....if ya game |
lets go...u set it up..n u drop first since u challenged
its alright, but its a start so its ok, but we'll work on it, so here's my verse
This verse is about wordplay, try to make something, similiar to this and try to make sense, cuz its no point saying words just to rhyme, and throw in a few personals like this....
Lyrical exercise was a starter, like first steps seen from a father/
and that batte that just spark, dug, I believe its a good starter/
come just a bit harder, I aint trying to stop ya/
but your mind is in a drought, uhh...I think you forgot the things you just thought of/
not cuz, you're fallin' under the weather, just get at me a lil better/
cuz how can you be big pimpin' when you aint got no chedda?/
so its best you better compensate, all the due im not trying to confiscate/
plus I aint trying to hate, I'm just helpin ya relate/
I'm not trying to be faded, I'm glad you came out on the verse to make it/
but you got uneasy bars, which makes the whole verse sound like its constipated/
how about we break it, with a lil bit of training you'll ace this/
cuz you is bold, with a heart thats ageless/
the attempt was good, but not famous, you're like a slave waitin' for his 40 acres/
but enough of that grad, its time to stop sounding courageous/
better kick ya flow, times up lets go, enough of blazin his mind up like drow/
just so you all should know, the state in his avatar isnt the only thing that blows/...
This verse is about wordplay, try to make something, similiar to this and try to make sense, cuz its no point saying words just to rhyme, and throw in a few personals like this....
Lyrical exercise was a starter, like first steps seen from a father/
and that batte that just spark, dug, I believe its a good starter/
come just a bit harder, I aint trying to stop ya/
but your mind is in a drought, uhh...I think you forgot the things you just thought of/
not cuz, you're fallin' under the weather, just get at me a lil better/
cuz how can you be big pimpin' when you aint got no chedda?/
so its best you better compensate, all the due im not trying to confiscate/
plus I aint trying to hate, I'm just helpin ya relate/
I'm not trying to be faded, I'm glad you came out on the verse to make it/
but you got uneasy bars, which makes the whole verse sound like its constipated/
how about we break it, with a lil bit of training you'll ace this/
cuz you is bold, with a heart thats ageless/
the attempt was good, but not famous, you're like a slave waitin' for his 40 acres/
but enough of that grad, its time to stop sounding courageous/
better kick ya flow, times up lets go, enough of blazin his mind up like drow/
just so you all should know, the state in his avatar isnt the only thing that blows/...
| QUOTE (Rascar @ Aug 10 2005, 09:16 PM) | ||
lets go...u set it up..n u drop first since u challenged |
lol..........sure rascar.........we will go bar for bar meaning....i drop two lines then you drop two lines.....Understand?
back2back? pfff.w/eva man...drop then...i aint seen too much of yo shit...drop
I'll set tha thread
| QUOTE (Setsotama @ Aug 10 2005, 02:36 PM) |
| its alright, but its a start so its ok, but we'll work on it, so here's my verse This verse is about wordplay, try to make something, similiar to this and try to make sense, cuz its no point saying words just to rhyme, and throw in a few personals like this.... Lyrical exercise was a starter, like first steps seen from a father/ and that batte that just spark, dug, I believe its a good starter/ come just a bit harder, I aint trying to stop ya/ but your mind is in a drought, uhh...I think you forgot the things you just thought of/ not cuz, you're fallin' under the weather, just get at me a lil better/ cuz how can you be big pimpin' when you aint got no chedda?/ so its best you better compensate, all the due im not trying to confiscate/ plus I aint trying to hate, I'm just helpin ya relate/ I'm not trying to be faded, I'm glad you came out on the verse to make it/ but you got uneasy bars, which makes the whole verse sound like its constipated/ how about we break it, with a lil bit of training you'll ace this/ cuz you is bold, with a heart thats ageless/ the attempt was good, but not famous, you're like a slave waitin' for his 40 acres/ but enough of that grad, its time to stop sounding courageous/ better kick ya flow, times up lets go, enough of blazin his mind up like drow/ just so you all should know, the state in his avatar isnt the only thing that blows/... |
that was hot sets, i know u a vet so thanks for helpin me, u got me good in that one lol especially wit tha avatar part, but yea that was my first time just off the brain and i know it didn't really make sense
thx, but I was training you yet showing you how majority of the battles go, and they dont hold back punches here
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