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Listen... I Know How Ta Make Tha Girl Feel, AHA
When My Draws Is Droppin, Her Jaw Is Droppin
Till Im Workin In Her Mouth Like A Orthadontist
Talkin Honest, Its Sumthin Wen Im Spittin Tha G
Got Her Slobbin After A Few Minutes Wit Me
A Strip Teaz Just Fly Tha Hype...
Coz She Ridin Right, Like I Taught Her How To Ride A Bike
So In Bed Im The Violent Type...
And This Aint Christmas Singin So You Know There Aint No Silent Nights
Ayo I'ma Tap That Ass
So Wen I Flash The Tags I Slide Up In Her Like Maxi Pads
Shit I Dunt Even Have To Ask...
And After Givin Me Brain She Giggle In Pain Like Laughing Gas
Thas A Fact, Dunt Make An Assumption
Coz I Keep Em On They Knees You Wud Think That She Prayin Or Sumthin
No Point In Makin A Fussin...
Plus Tha Sex Is So Hot That Ima Bust A Volcano Eruption
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damn...can i get some feedback
100% pure hood fucking,
good shit
good shit
lol thx man..
| QUOTE (Setsotama @ Aug 10 2005, 01:09 PM) |
| 100% pure hood fucking, good shit |
cosign..nasty!
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yeah, lol, but you wanted me to call you LOL
yup..still do..
| QUOTE (MIMI_05 @ Aug 10 2005, 01:14 PM) |
| yup..still do.. |
oh for'real?
PM me plz
i was jokin'
i know, playing along as well
| QUOTE (Setsotama @ Aug 10 2005, 01:28 PM) |
| i know, playing along as well |
ahahah!
*ahem* back to the topic...
i thought it was good at some points, had some tight lines like...
i thought it was good at some points, had some tight lines like...
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| And This Aint Christmas Singin So You Know There Aint No Silent Nights |
^^liked that line
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| So Wen I Flash The Tags I Slide Up In Her Like Maxi Pads |
^^
this line was hmmm, ill give u props for the effort. im assuming u a male so i wont put this too much on u, but before u put down lines like that, wouldnt u think to do ya homework? FYI MAXI PADS dont slide up IN the girl males.. im tellin u..
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| Plus Tha Sex Is So Hot That Ima Bust A Volcano Eruption |
^^this line i personally liked as well, dont know if its just me, but i posted a similar "volcano" line a few weeks ago and now im seein them more and more
but i would suggest u woulda put a "like" or "than" in the line to make the comparism/metaphor come off smootheroverall i enjoyed ya verse, at times ya flow seemed a bit off, but coulda just been the way i was readin it. the subject matter was kinda creative, cause i mightve seen some shit on the subject before but not really lately.. u wanted feedback, and u said "please" so here it is
thx man...and all for feedbacks
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