Over Stan instrumental


Damn,Street is really mad......maybe he's mad cause he got a KO before Rare even dropped his verse,maybe he's mad he can't even make a full 16,maybe he's mad that he became a laughing stock within a day on XXL,or maybe it's cause he dropped the weakest verse in XXL history next to me but I got a 7-0 KO with mines.


Dear street I only wanna make you prone to facts
how you only battled once and already known as wack
Rare kicked ya teeth in now they call you Snaggletooth
now nobody takes you seriously enough to battle you
get some dick riders then ya rhymes will get a root or two
if you ever need me I could always tutor you
faggot you get ya ass filled with cream like a rind ding
ya rhymes is wack what the fuck you thinking
I don't even know if I should just finish this verse
or just break out the voodoo dolls and give you a curse
mc frank,dirty K,now streets I don't know who's worse
but instead of knockin you just keep writin don't let up
i will write but not this time you ain't worth it so this is an un-finshed letter




Man come with some respectable shit next time and maybe I might actually take you seriously.

(2X)
His verse went cold he's wonderin' why? why, he picked up the pen at all/
the 16 bars fell out the window, but now we seen it all/
and even if he writes, it's gunna all be gay/
but freestyles, we'd murder ya'll, It reminds us thats he's just so wack, he's just so wack/







no verse, just a add on chorus from Jae's verse

Umm you had a little bit of good personals probably could be okay on audio. But it wasn't hittin hard though I'm new to this site. I don't know much about potna. But you need a lil vocab, multiz, and stronger personals in there. Try rhymin more than a couple lines together before switch ya pattern too. Get heads bobbin will reading as if on audio. Besides that it did flow some what.

1

O.K. IT'S COOL!!! AM STILL DISS'N! NOW WHAT!

MY REP DIDN'T COME FROM MESSAGE BOARD
BATTLES! I SPIT EVERY RAP I PUT ON
HERE. EVERY NIGGAS SAID MY SHIT WAS ON
POINT! THEY SEEN DA ALL COMPUTER MCS DAT
TOOK SHOTS AT ME ! BUT DA ONLY ONE 2 REPLY
TA MY DISS WAS SETSOTAMA. WHEN MY NIGGAS
TRIED 2 READ MY SHIT, IT SOUNDED BAD I
ADMIT DAT! AM A ON DA CORNER, FACE 2 FACE
TYPE OF RAPPER! I EVEN SPIT POETRY, CASH'D CHECKS &
GOTTEN 4 AWARDS FOR MY SKILLZ! WHAT HAVE YOUR SKILL
EARNED U? OH YEAH! I SEEN HOW
U GOT BURN'D BY WATER! GROW A PAIR NUTZ & REPLY!
BESIDE DAT, I AIN'T HEARD NOTHIN DEEP FROM NOBODY
ON DIS BOARD!

I FEEL SORRY 4 U STYLES, CAUSE MOST MCS GET THERE RESPECT

FROM DA STREET BATTLES, BUT U GET YOURS FROM A XXL

MESSAGE BOARD!! (GUESS CAN'T CHOKE BEHIND A COMPUTER CAN U? )