Agression showing tension, convention blowing complexion/
Mention my glowing section, a selection of flowing expression/
Forgive deteriorated incisions, live intoxicated missions//
Imperative concentrated decisions, narrative invigorated visions//
Give discriminated precisions, interrogative hated religions//
Relative incarcerated snitchens, hate with terminated divisions//
Spitting Sick G myth words, hitting with thee quick verbs//
Tripping clicks see stiff slurs, Flipping pricks be dick mixtures//
Revealing & appealing ya mind, stealing & feeling my rhyme//
Healing & concealing the time, ya ceiling be peeling fine!//
Beating misleading crimes, seating be feeding the times//
Repeating the heating lines, deceiving beefing with rhymes!//
Precision backing incision, vision slacking intuition//
Ammunition attacking condition, coalition smacking snitchen//
Mission interacting descision, wishin' attracting prison//
Division subtracting livin', intermission impacting bitchin'!//
Some quick shit... Holla at me! well u cant im dead
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That shit was nice kid!
thanks
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That was live, crazy wordplay tru
| QUOTE (Hytola @ Aug 7 2005, 06:07 PM) |
| That was live, crazy wordplay tru |
thanks homie
| QUOTE (Tru Balla from the dead @ Jul 31 2005, 11:55 PM) |
| Agression showing tension, convention blowing complexion/ Mention my glowing section, a selection of flowing expression/ Forgive deteriorated incisions, live intoxicated missions// Imperative concentrated decisions, narrative invigorated visions// Give discriminated precisions, interrogative hated religions// Relative incarcerated snitchens, hate with terminated divisions// Spitting Sick G myth words, hitting with thee quick verbs// Tripping clicks see stiff slurs, Flipping pricks be dick mixtures// Revealing & appealing ya mind, stealing & feeling my rhyme// Healing & concealing the time, ya ceiling be peeling fine!// Beating misleading crimes, seating be feeding the times// Repeating the heating lines, deceiving beefing with rhymes!// Precision backing incision, vision slacking intuition// Ammunition attacking condition, coalition smacking snitchen// Mission interacting descision, wishin' attracting prison// Division subtracting livin', intermission impacting bitchin'!// Some quick shit... Holla at me! well u cant im dead |
ur rhyming scheme is on point! i used to rhyme like that but TRUST me...you get tired because it does get to a point where youre like..."is anyone ever going to read these...or is anyone ever going to hear this?" ...but nice scheme..and you stay loyal to the format throughout...good shit...you should write that down and spit it for real...i havent written a rhyme that i could say that about on this site in ages...anyways..nice shit man
Rappers come and go, and Tru is a good reason to start rappin' again, good shit man
damn? i didnt know u was a rapper! nice!
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| QUOTE (Tru Balla from the dead @ Jul 31 2005, 11:55 PM) |
| Agression showing tension, convention blowing complexion/ Mention my glowing section, a selection of flowing expression/ Forgive deteriorated incisions, live intoxicated missions// Imperative concentrated decisions, narrative invigorated visions// Give discriminated precisions, interrogative hated religions// Relative incarcerated snitchens, hate with terminated divisions// Spitting Sick G myth words, hitting with thee quick verbs// Tripping clicks see stiff slurs, Flipping pricks be dick mixtures// Revealing & appealing ya mind, stealing & feeling my rhyme// Healing & concealing the time, ya ceiling be peeling fine!// Beating misleading crimes, seating be feeding the times// Repeating the heating lines, deceiving beefing with rhymes!// Precision backing incision, vision slacking intuition// Ammunition attacking condition, coalition smacking snitchen// Mission interacting descision, wishin' attracting prison// Division subtracting livin', intermission impacting bitchin'!// Some quick shit... Holla at me! well u cant im dead |
Sorry homey, i don't think this is you
haha
but what eva its all kool im done trying to prove to ya niggas dat i can write
but what eva its all kool im done trying to prove to ya niggas dat i can write
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