I drop lyrical bombs the size of Saturn
turning all who oppose me into fading patterns
I whip ass with rhythmitcal belt leaving pink welts
droppin lines so hot make the the ink on ya tattoo melt
cranium cannot handle these rhymes opening leaving skulls infected
check it higly respected,the best selected
brand new scheme makin yours defective
I get praise like i'm Jesus resurrected
spittin textual melodies,rhymes should be locked in correctional facilities
not the greatest to ever be,but still good enough to blur your vision like extascy
nuclear flow that taints lakes,on my way up while you chippin off like paint flakes
preaching on the podium,burning you like slugs and sodium,smokin you like opium
can't fuck with me like i'm cellibant
killin it,highly militant,silk style superbly elegant
crush infoior beings with the force of elephants
any further statements from you are irrelevant
Just tryin sumthin new,testin out my vocab and my multis.
Full Version: Keystyle......feedback Appreciated
thats impressive,
also sound like Jae Hood (ironicly enough)
also sound like Jae Hood (ironicly enough)
dat shit is fire keep it up
| QUOTE (Setsotama @ Jul 31 2005, 11:00 PM) |
| thats impressive, also sound like Jae Hood (ironicly enough) |
That's a ca-winky-dink there,I suprised cause I ain't talk about drugs,guns,money,or ho's in there so I did'nt know how I could sound like Jae Hood,but dude is sick so I take it as a compliment 
your flow, vocab and wordplay almost sound like him
In my opinion that's a good thing. 
| QUOTE (Jae Stylez @ Jul 31 2005, 09:57 PM) |
| I drop lyrical bombs the size of Saturn turning all who oppose me into fading patterns I whip ass with rhythmitcal belt leaving pink welts droppin lines so hot make the the ink on ya tattoo melt cranium cannot handle these rhymes opening leaving skulls infected check it higly respected,the best selected brand new scheme makin yours defective I get praise like i'm Jesus resurrected spittin textual melodies,rhymes should be locked in correctional facilities not the greatest to ever be,but still good enough to blur your vision like extascy nuclear flow that taints lakes,on my way up while you chippin off like paint flakes preaching on the podium,burning you like slugs and sodium,smokin you like opium can't fuck with me like i'm cellibant killin it,highly militant,silk style superbly elegant crush infoior beings with the force of elephants any further statements from you are irrelevant Just tryin sumthin new,testin out my vocab and my multis. |
Shit was hot, but your flow fell off when them long lines, try to cut down some words, but other then that. Hot.
Thanks,after I posted it I noticed I put too many syllables in one line which is sumthin that I have trouble not doing,but thanks anyways MR.
| QUOTE (Jae Stylez @ Jul 31 2005, 10:11 PM) |
| Thanks,after I posted it I noticed I put too many syllables in one line which is sumthin that I have trouble not doing,but thanks anyways MR. |
Word, you were keystyling, it's understandable.
P.S. drop some feed on my Point of No Return written when you get some time.
that was nice..
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