Alarm clock in the distance but I still haven’t slept
Manipulated with ideas of massive threats
As cold sweat drips over my nervous expression
Confused cuz it’s the last resort to teach lessons
I get packed, look back and continue forward
Point of no return, from now on I’ll seem lower
I walk through the empty hallways as I start to leave
Not a soul on the floor level yet I still can’t breathe
Outside now and I see many happy faces
People from all religions, many races from dif places
I step on the bus pay the fare and keep walkin
My brain wants to be a soldier but my heart keeps stallin
Convince myself of what I was told over the years
Change must always start from the shattered of tears
So this is it now, I release this obligation
I try to stand up rapidly without hesitation
Pick up the detonator connected to my luggage bomb
But all my heart and motivation is suddenly gone
To be continued
Full Version: Point Of No Return
HOOK: YO. YO. YO TO BE CONTINUED.... YO. YO. YO. TO BE CONTINUED...
I'M FEELIN THAT.
I'M FEELIN THAT.
| QUOTE (silence @ Jul 31 2005, 03:56 PM) |
| HOOK: YO. YO. YO TO BE CONTINUED.... YO. YO. YO. TO BE CONTINUED... I'M FEELIN THAT. |
Thanks, anymore feed?
Good or bad doesn't matter.
this shit is hot man, and thx for the feedback on my poem
Nice shit,even though that's a touchy subject nice shit,nice vocab too,wish it was longer I was gettin into the shit,nice.
| QUOTE (Jae Stylez @ Jul 31 2005, 10:27 PM) |
| Nice shit,even though that's a touchy subject nice shit,nice vocab too,wish it was longer I was gettin into the shit,nice. |
Thanks, hopefully i'll write the 2nd part to it today.
If I can get it right, it's gonna be a dope concept.
For real,I don't think some shit like this has been done,you on some "Trap In The Closet" creativity shit. 
| QUOTE (Jae Stylez @ Jul 31 2005, 10:37 PM) |
| For real,I don't think some shit like this has been done,you on some "Trap In The Closet" creativity shit. |
I think it's cuz we're both from the Chi.
For real?I thought you was from Cali or sumthin and that ain't a Mexican stereotype.
| QUOTE (Jae Stylez @ Jul 31 2005, 10:44 PM) |
| For real? I thought you was from Cali or sumthin and that ain't a Mexican stereotype. |
Next think you know your gonna say my name is JOZE GONZALEZ or however you spell it.
Time to steal some tires ese.
I was acually gonna say Paco Sanchez or sumthin like that.
| QUOTE |
| Time to steal some tires ese. |
| QUOTE (Multiple Roundz @ Jul 31 2005, 10:49 PM) |
| Next think you know your gonna say my name is JOZE GONZALEZ or however you spell it. Time to steal some tires ese. |
Next think you know your gonna say my name is JOZE GONZALEZ or however you spell it.
Time to steal some tires ese.[/QUOTE]
stop stealing my jokes ese, for i call immigration
| QUOTE |
| stop stealing my jokes ese, for i call immigration |
Shit son, you know how many fake social's I have?
Do your worst.
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