i aint no rapper but im gonna try... im not startin beef.. i just wanna freestyle so here goes

im rappin this freestyle
your freestyle is bitch style
u cant do tricks
i give u a cookie not a bone
you aint no dawg dont try to b one
throw bricks and hide yo head
ill throw bricks and cap yo head
u started dis beef
imma finish dis beef
you done like a beaten champ on da floor
i knocked u out wit a 1 2 punch
u just as easy to beat as 50
he a bitch
u a snitch
run to the cops ill b bustin at em too
dey cant stop a true g in this shit

keep that for yo' scribble pad

lol i aint good... i actually do scribble down shit... im tryin to get better... i dont think im good... but hey the more i try the better i get right?.. so im here tryin..

you gets slapped backwards with this rap
you gets smacked
you falls for my trap
bitch you lips flap
no matter which track
as I sits back
when I gets lit n' flips the scrip
you gets the dick
shredded inta bits
up in my shit all intimate
as if you've been inta it
for many minutes
with each letter you diminish
more n' more
with a four n' four
you gets torn n' thrown to the floor
etc. etc. etc.

lol kk im not startin beef but i need somethin to work wit im new to this

elevate
elevate myself to da thrown
deflate you like a river raft
take da 45 and get blown
u aint a playa u a draft pick
why im the #1 superstar
u just a dickwad ridin some hommies cock
i pack 45's for bitches like u im a star
im da best hommie on da block

lol i think thats a lil better than my first attempt

YO WHEN YOUR IN A BATTLE ARE YOU RUNNING OR ARE YOU TRYING TO WIN THE WAR WELL JUST TO LET YOU KNOW BATTLE IT MEANS TRY TO EXPOSE YOUR ENEMY AS BEST YOU CAN TRY TO GET PERSONAL LIKE THE DUDE JUST RAPED YOUR SISTER AND YOU WANT REVENGE TRY TO WRITE 16 BARRS THATS 32 LINES AND MAKE EACH ONE A PUNCH LINE USE THINGS THAT ARE IN TODAYS WORLD COMPARE YOUR ENEMY TO SOMETHING THAT IS HUMILATING (SPELL CHECK) THEY CALL IT MURDERRRRRRRRRRR

well help me out man.. lol im new to this im tryin haha.. only way i can get better is thru tryin so thats wut im doin haha

YEAH LIKE GANGSTARR SAID TAKE IT PERSONAL TAKE TAKE IT PERSONAL
JUST KEEP IT UP EVEN IF THEY SAY YOU SUCK DON'T LISTEWN AND DON'T GIVE IN STUDY SOME OF THESE CATS AND YOU WILL BECOME BETTER

thats wut ive been doin... and im tryin to get better scribblin down shit whenever i think of somethin...