2 Many N.I.G.G.A.S

an ordinary day/yo, im on the court playin/
ball, appauled, i lost/the blasted sport again/
im thinkin of going home, im broke/just to let you know/
i need to get some doe/so i get my connections over/
we arrange a meet/team up/and set the plan/
the score, the dealio/our targets the bank/
we plan this all the way/all spick and span/
youll be quick to hand it to me/no fix, no blanks/
arithmatic advances/at night fall/
at dusk, just a riffle/
adjusted to my right side/of my clothes
but what i'd like to/do is zoom in with my crew/
by the front door, or the rooftake the loot and boom/
but i gotta be serious/no time for games/
im tryin to get paid here/like right away/
as day becomes night/i think the time has come/
jump in the ride/5 of us 3 rides and dust/

Chorus:
2 many niggas think money
is a way to live life plenty/
to the fullest, thell pull any/
trick in the book
they crooks
somethings will never change/
hey shit aint fair
but that was the way they raised
2many niggas..


we on the way there/make new aquaintances/
recognize dudes face/he was there when a shooting took place/
what up nigga? you down to ride/showed me his nine/
told me he had a child to supply for/
we all talk about hoes that we macked before/
Keisha with the drawback, Maelyse with the fat jaw/
we laughed mad crazy, that shit was raw nigga/
whats more nigga/i heard she turned whore nigga/
thats all good and well/hell, id give the girl a roastin/
but quiet, pipe down, right now cuz we approchin'/
the location, Ayman and Loc/boastin, what theyll do with their part of the doe/
stopped in the middle to ask, Rascar? man i dont know/
invest it somewhere/ "you dumn man"/
imma buy sum vest and guns and/kill the president, dump him/
fuck his bitch, then stick her right there in their love nest/
fuck this, im getting nervous/im bout to close the part of the curtain/
for certain

chorus

we pull up to the bank, Lloyd the informaniac/
brainiac, detaches the alarm, better make it fast/
breaks the chain, aha!/my hands rubbin/
lickin my lips, you know how i get/my mans commin'/
jump in/go straight through/
it aint kool butif theres only gold in the safe/its ok well make do/
we get our boy lloyd to do his shit/who woulda assumed it/
a trap, crap! its the boys in blue, shit!/
some dude musta tipped em/they bring the guns out/
im ready, i got my semi/but i get hit up some how/
my boys get capped/my fellow African Americans/
its a poignant fact/that the bad guys never win/
they all dead, im the only one left/
left the bank, empty tank/they put one in my head/

chorus

the moral of this story is/stick to school/
dont be a fool, dude/like you got better shit to do/
life is conditional/you can survive it/
or die/
if youve a death wish/than let this shit suffice it/
violence never prevails/it fails/theres no fairy tales/
only jail, sorry don't know what else to tell ya/
you can get rich, its not impossible/
but its dinner time, chicken tonight, so i got to go

echo...

think about it

Copyright ? 2005 Rascar

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That shit was raw kid,except for the last verse tellin kids to stay in school you McGruff The Crime Dog ?

Good shit cheah....but jae is the best on here and i vote for him in every battle...
yada he's my boyfriend or sumthin.....

P.s check my new avatar of mac dre taking it up the ass....

Nice story! kid!

lol, nah but i mean..not EVERYone is gunna hit the high timeor jaack pot and getin qualifications is betta dan havin to scrape 4 pennies, nickles and dimes feel me? but thnks for the feed back..

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Yeah I feel you but not to be a critiqe but try to use more rhymes kid,I notice you throw out alot of words like you gonna rhyme them but you don't,it's not bad but it throws the quality off,and people won't enjoy it that much.

peep the rhyme scheme kid..anyways, im not sure...but i keystyled the whole thing on the spot..imma write the shit down, the make it better then record it cuz i like the idea of having a stroy type rhyme..thanks 4 the advice tho

The shit was still nice though.

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Your multis are nice, got a Nas-esque feel to your rhyming patterns

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ééééééyyooooooooo, BUMP mayn...come on now, i need some muhfuckin feedback

im gunna re write this shit and record it because i need a story for my demo so im going to elaborate more on some facts here, and im going to devellop some thoughts in this rap and the stories and plots..shit is gunna b sick...

Yo RAS, I was feelin that shyt. I don't know how to quote shyt but theres several bars in that rhyme that i would like to point out where your multis was viscous.

Overall I think thats a track worth puttin on ya demo due to the lyrics alone.

just go on my post there and look for the quote button..and then put what u want n dont wat mayn..its always gud to hear what fellow MC's think fa real...

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I was feelin that ras....u did a nice job....but forgot 2 say 2 many niggas b hatin on eachother....but that was nice.....

i actually wrote a song bout that called 2my niggas...even if it dont go platinum or wateva umma still record n album n issgoin talk bout nigga n the streets n yada yada..i got a song called 21 shots..its like an army salute when niggas die..so 21 for the niggas dyin in the streets n shit..but thanx yo

EVERYTIME I SEE A NEW POST BY MY MAN RAS, I'M QUICK TO READ IT. BECAUSE I KNOW HE BOUT TO DROP SOME STRAIGHT FIRE,OR SOME STRAIGHT KNOWLEDGE. I ONLY GOT ONE QUESTION. "HOW DID A YOUNG NIGGA, GET TO KNOW SO MUCH".
FIRE, STRAIGHT FIRE...BUT WHAT ELSE WOULD I EXPECT.

thanks man..its just application and appliance...i apply what ive been thru, what i hear and see...plus i wanted to do a biggie style narration..thansk for the feedback tho

im recordin this soon...

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yo that was great, yo alot of people may not feel that last verse but me bein only 15 i can relate to it. i love readin ur raps there great man